Question

The crowd at the airport moved forward like waves. The passengers had been waiting for a couple of hours for an airline employee to open the door leading to the plane outside. No one was in a good mood. An old man got trapped in the middle of the rush. Suddenly, he fell down, his head hitting the concrete floor, with blood gushing from his forehead. He appeared to be unconscious. Everyone rushed past him, except for Dana. She called for help.
A minute later, a young airline employee showed up. Hardly looking at the old man, she told Dana to get aboard her plane. She said the old man would be okay, and walked away.
Dana screamed for help. An airport supervisor appeared. He told Dana to get on the plane. Dana said that she was not moving until an ambulance arrived. The supervisor said her plane would leave without her. Dana said that she didn’t care.
An ambulance and two doctors finally arrived. The paramedics said that the man would be okay, but he would need stitches（缝线）. They put him into the ambulance and drove off.
On her way out to the plane, which was still refueling, Dana saw the employee who had ignored the old man. The employee said, “You’re lucky the plane didn’t leave without you.”
“The plane?” Dana asked. “Who cares about the plane? How could you be so cold? That was an old man; he could have been your grandfather! How would you like it if everyone just stepped over your grandfather and went on their way?”
【写作内容】
1、以约30词概括上文的主要内容；
2、以约120词谈谈你阅读了该故事后的感受，内容包括：
(1) 当时在场的人是怎样的一种心理？
(2) 如果你当时也在场，你将如何处理？
(3) 你对整个事件作如何评价？
【写作要求】
1、在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2、作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

Answer 1

Ready to get aboard, an old man suddenly got fainted, head bleeding. The rest of the passengers, including the airline employee walked past except Dana, who accompanied him until an ambulance came to his rescue.
Psychologically, the passengers must have been feeling sorry. However, already a couple of hours wasted, they couldn’t wait to board the plane. That way, it could take off sooner and reach their destinations earlier. Similarly, the employee didn’t want to cause more delays and complaints.
If I were present, I would undoubtedly act quickly, carrying him and rushing for the nearest hospital. For me, life can’t be more precious. How could I walk my way ignoring a bleeding being?
Certainly, we can’t blame passengers for their “coldness”. It was understandable when they rushed their way once time was due. However, the staff of the airport should bear the responsibility to ensure every passenger’s safety. It was nobody but they that was offering service.

试题分析：本文属于读写任务写作，动笔前，一定要认真阅读原文，并理解内容。认真看清题目要求，这篇书面表达给了一段材料：先要求以约30个词概括上文的主要内容，要求有很高的概括提炼的能力，要抓住文章的主题，再以约120个词写一篇短文，按照要点去表达，不能有遗漏，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。写作时尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型，同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。
【亮点说明】范文对文章进行简明扼要的归纳，自己的观点明确，有理有据，其中不乏好的短语和句子：couldn’t wait to do迫不及待的做…， a couple of几个， blame sb. for sth“因为…责备某人”，bear the responsibility “承担责任”，Ready to get aboard, an old man suddenly got fainted, head bleeding. 这句话用了形容词做状语和独立主格结构，The rest of the passengers, including the airline employee walked past except Dana, who accompanied him until an ambulance came to his rescue.这句话用了定语从句， If I were present, I would undoubtedly act quickly, carrying him and rushing for the nearest hospital. 这句话用了虚拟语气和现在分词， It was nobody but they that was offering service.这句话用了强调句。