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目前,许多学校对学生采取封闭管理,学生对此看法不一。请根据下表所提供的信息,写一篇短文,谈谈你自己的看法。

有的同学认为

有的同学认为

1.学校限制我们的自由;

2.学生和社会接触少;

3.学生的兴趣和爱好不能得到充分的发展。

1.学校是学习知识的地方;

2.学生应该安心在学校里学习;

3.学生缺乏自觉性,离开了老师,可能会做一些影响学习的事情。

你的看法:……

注意:1.短文须包含提示中的要点,但不得逐句翻译;

2.词数:100左右。

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【答案】

Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long.Students have different opinions about it.

Some of the students think they enjoy less freedom and have little chance to get in touch with society.They are not able to fully develop their interests and hobbies.Therefore,they have less interest in their studies.

Others think a school is the best place to get knowledge,so they should put their heart into their lessons.Some students lack the ability to control themselves.Once out of school,they may lose control of themselves and do something that will affect their studies.

From my point of view,it is necessary to keep students at school.But at the same time schools should organize various activities so that students can enjoy their school life.

【解析】本文是一篇半开放性的作文,是学校对学生采取封闭管理,学生不同看法,两种不同的观点以表格形式出现,要求表达清楚,还要写出自己的观点,留给考生发挥的余地较大,在写作的过程中,我们可以使用1-2个高级的句型,如倒装句,强调句,定语从句等。象范文中的Once out of school,they may lose control of themselves and do something that will affect their studies.和at the same time schools should organize various activities so that students can enjoy their school life.同时注意使用合适的连接词,让文章更加流畅。

 

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目前,许多学校对学生采取封闭式管理,学生对此看法不一。请根据下表所提供的信息,写一篇短文,介绍学生的看法;并谈谈自己的观点。(字数120左右)

有的同学认为:

学校限制我们的自由;

学生和社会接触少;

学生的兴趣和爱好不能得到充分的发展。

有的同学认为:

学校是学习知识的地方:学生应该安心在学校里学习;

学生缺乏自觉性,离开了老师,可能会……

你的看法:……

       注意:

       1.不要逐字翻译。

       2.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。

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