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     Recently I have conducted a survey on whether girls should lose weight among my classmates.
     Seventy percent of the students hold the opinion that girls should lose weight. In their opinion, girls who
are slim are more beautiful and attractive, and they are more confident in their study and work than those
who are fat.
     However, 30% of the students have different opinions. They think it is a waste of time and money to lose
weight. In addition, losing weight may be harmful to the body and mind. In all, nothing is more important than
healthy. If girls keep taking the weight-loss pills and stop doing it one day, they will become fatter.
     In my opinion, there is no need for young girls to lose weight as long as they are healthy.
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