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12．【作文题目】假如你是九校中学高二学生李华，请给你的朋友Charles写一封信，告诉他你即将参加学校英语听力竞赛（English listening contest），内容包括：
　　1．竞赛时间；
　　2．你此时的心情；
　　3．你的希望（成绩，所得）．
注意：
　　1．词数120左右；
　　2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
　　3．开头和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Charles，
　　How are you these days？________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息给你的朋友Charles写一封信，告诉他你即将参加学校英语听力竞赛（English listening contest），写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：竞赛时间；你此时的心情；你的希望（成绩，所得）． 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：As we all know众所周知；on behalf of代表；To be honest诚实的说；At the same time同时；not only，but also不仅，而且；
As we all know，listening is very important for a student who is learning a language．（高分句型一）
It is for the reason that our school is to hold an English listening contest next Friday to improve our listening skills．（高分句型二）
What makes me happy is that I have been chosen on behalf of our class．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Charles，
      How are you these days？I am writing this letter to tell you something about a contest in our school．
　　As we all know，listening is very important for a student who is learning a language．（高分句型一）It is for the reason that our school is to hold an English listening contest next Friday to improve our listening skills．（高分句型二）What makes me happy is that I have been chosen on behalf of our class．（高分句型三）
　　To be honest，I do feel nervous more or less，fearing that I can't get a satisfying prize and that I will let my classmates down．At the same time，I am quite excited，because only by challenging ourselves from time to time can we make progress all around．I hope I can make it，not only bringing honor to our class but also improving myself．（高分句型四） God bless me．
　　I believe you will give me your best wishes though you are not around，won't you？
　　Best wishes，
                                                                                                                                                                                                     Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．