题目内容
【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was asked to deliver the speech before the whole class at the age of 9! I felt shy the moment I thought of that. Therefore, I had no choice but to prepare for them. The real moment began when I stood on the platform with so many eyes fixing on me. My listeners were waiting patient. I gradually found myself back, giving my speech. My audience applauded at last, which means I made it. After then, my fear of talking before lots of people has been disappeared. The greatest difficulty on our way to success is your fear. Overcome it, we will be able to achieve our goals.
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【解析】1. 句意:我九岁的时候被邀请给全班学生做一次演讲。泛指一次演讲,不是特指,故speech前的the要改为a。
2. 句意:我一想到演讲就感到害羞。然而,我别无选择只能为它做准备。根据后面but to prepare for them可知,此处是转折关系,故把Therefore改为However。
3. 然而,我别无选择只能为它做准备。代指一次演讲,要用单数,故把them改为it。
4. 固定搭配:with one’s eyes fixed on sb. 目不转睛地盯着某人。fix与eyes是被动关系,故把fixing改为fixed。
5. 句意:我的听众耐心地等待。副词修饰动词,故把patient改为patiently。
6. 句意:最后观众为我鼓掌,这意味着我成功了。讲述过去的事情用一般过去时态,故把mean改为meant。
7. 句意:自从那时起,我在众人面前讲话的恐惧已经消失了。故把After变Since。
8. 句意:自从那时起,我在众人面前讲话的恐惧已经消失了。disappear是不及物动词,无被动语态,故去掉been。
9. 句意:通向我们成功道路的最大困难是我们自己的恐惧。故把your改为our。
10. 句意:把恐惧克服,那么我们就会实现我们的目标。前一句是祈使句,后一句也是完整的句子,所以中间要有连词连接,根据这两句之间是顺承关系,故在we前加and。
【题目】短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
得分 | 阅卷 |
请改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词;
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉;
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last week, our school had organized an activity to climb the West Mountain. As soon as we arrived at the foot of a mountain, we set out for the summit in high spirits. During the climb, we had such much difficulty passing the rocky areas. But under the teacher’s help, we eventually reached the top, where we greeted by the bright sunshine and fresh air. Seeing from the top, the city was extreme beautiful. This event turned out to be very success. Not only did we take a break from our heavy school work, and also we learned what to communicate with each other.
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