Question

【题目】假如你是李华，是你校English Club的团长。请你用英语给全校同学写一封信，简要阐述参加英语社团的好处，并建议大家踊跃参加。要点如下：

1. 锻炼英语口语；

2. 提高沟通能力，广交朋友；

3. 使学校生活更加丰富多彩。

注意：1. 100词左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头已给出，不记入总词数。

Dear schoolmates,

On behalf of our English Club I’d like to ______________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear schoolmates,

On behalf of our English Club I’d like to introduce the advantages of taking part in our activities. First of all, we can practice our spoken English because spoken English plays an important part in our English studies. Then we can also benefit a lot from communicating with each other. It can help us make more friends in the club. What’s more, as we are busy in studying and doing homework all day long, the club gives us chances to relax ourselves, which makes our school life happy and colorful.

So why not join us as soon as possible? Let’s do our best and make our club better and better!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：假如你是李华，是你校English Club的团长。请你用英语给全校同学写一封信，简要阐述参加英语社团的好处，并建议大家踊跃参加。要点如下：1. 锻炼英语口语；2. 提高沟通能力，广交朋友；3. 使学校生活更加丰富多彩。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1. 100词左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头已给出，不记入总词数。

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