Question

【题目】假如你是拉姆，你的朋友Li Hua 爱吃甜食，她现在很胖，走路都很困难，请你给她写一封建议书，告诉她：

1.少吃甜食，因为甜食易引发心脏病；

2.多吃水果和蔬菜；

3.多进行体育锻炼；

4.要求：语音连贯，词数在100字左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Li Hua,

I haven’t written to you for a long time. How are you getting on with your study? And what about your health?

I heard that you are too fat now. Is it true? I think I’d better give you some advice. It must be useful for you.

First, you should eat less meat and sweet food, for example, cream, chocolate, cakes, ect. Please eat more fruit and vegetables. Do more exercise, such as walking to school, riding a bike, playingbasketball.You should exercise thirty minutes three times a day.

Please keep on! I think you’ll be thinner and healthier.

Yours,

La Mu

【解析】试题分析：本文是一封写给你的朋友Li Hua的一封建议书。她爱吃甜食，她现在很胖，走路都很困难，告诉她：少吃甜食，因为甜食易引发心脏病；多吃水果和蔬菜；多进行体育锻炼。写作时首先要认真阅读前面的提示，根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

本文是一封建议书，以一般现在时态和祈使句为主，内容符合要求，重点突出，结构布局合理，文中使用高级句子。How are you getting on with your study? And what about your health?开头使用问句，很是巧妙，把人引入正题；I think I’d better give you some advice.使用宾语从句；It must be useful for you.此句中must表示推测；Please keep on!此祈使句使用有力度。