Question

短文改错

假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不记分。

Ladies and Gentlemen：

　　Welcomed to the West Lake．First of all, let me make a brief introduction for it．

　　The West Lake like a shining pearl lying in the west of Hangzhou City．Surrounded by hill on the three sides, it is famous for it beautiful scenery, a plenty of historic sites and a variety of local products．Legend has it that the West Lake was a jewel falling from heaven when geologists insist this place had been a shallow sea gulf before it became that it is today．In any case, the West Lake inspired poets and painters for centuries．Enjoy your trip．Thank you!

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