Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Tony打算假期再次来你市参加中文培训班。他想提前了解近年来你市的变化。请你给他写封回信，包括下列内容：

1. 环境更优美了；

2. 出行更方便了：

3. 传统文化更受重视了。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。

Dear Tony,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tony,

I’m glad to know that you will come to our city again and learn Chinese during the coming vocation. China has witnessed great changes in the environment, transportation and education since you left. Our city also takes on a new look: the sky is a lot clearer and the sun is much brighten. Not only can we take a long journey by high-speed train at a speed of over 300 kilometers per hour, but also shared bikes provide us with a more convenient way of traveling. As for our school life, we are taught more about our traditional culture which we are proud of. I believe you’ll have a good time in China.

Looking forward to your visit.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】首先审题，这篇文章要求假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Tony打算假期再次来你市参加中文培训班。他想提前了解近年来你市的变化。请你给他写封回信，包括下列内容：

1. 环境更优美了；2. 出行更方便了：3. 传统文化更受重视了。其次选用正确的人称和时态，用一般现在时、第一人称来写。然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。具体来说，写这篇文章时，要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不要遗漏。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的复合句。例如：使用了宾语从句I’m glad to know that you will come to our city again and learn Chinese during the coming vocation.和宾语从句I believe you’ll have a good time in China.