Question

【题目】假设你是李华，你班将于本周日去红枫湖游玩。请你根据以下信息给外教Tom写信，邀请他参加。

1.出发及返回时间；

2.活动：骑车，划船，烧烤等。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Tom,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

Our class is planning to go for an outing this Sunday,so I am writing to invite you to join us.

We’re scheduled to gather at the school gate at 9: 00 a.m,and take a bus to Hongfeng Lake,which will take about half an hour.The varieties of activities will definitely appeal to us.We’ll have a lot of fun riding bicycles, rowing boats in the lake and even barbecuing.About 3 hours later,we’ll be back to school.

I’m sure you will like this program.We sincerely hope you can come and enjoy a good time with us.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文属于提纲类作文。我们可以根据提示将这些信息进行整理和安排，使文章的意思衔接更自然。文中所使用的词汇和句型，是学生们比较熟悉的，所以将平时的积累发挥出来就可以。当然我们要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词，使文章上下文意思连贯，更出彩。短文中作者按照题目的要求条理清楚，结构清晰，要点全面。文章语言简练，结构严谨，覆盖所有要点。定语从句：We’re scheduled to gather at the school gate at 9: 00 a.m,and take a bus to Hongfeng Lake,which will take about half an hour.