题目内容
19.为了丰富同学们的课外活动,校学生会决定组建自行车俱乐部(Cycling Club).假如你是学生会主席.请根据以下提示,用英语准备一份口头通知.l、俱乐部的主要活动内容:
●每周一次的基础训练,有教师辅导,安排在课外体育活动时间;
●每月一次的户外活动,安排在月末双休日;
●同其他团体进行比赛;
2、参加俱乐部的好处:(内容自拟,至少两点);
3、注意事项:器材自备,活动免费;
4、如何加入俱乐部(可以亲自到5号大楼6层602房间报名,也可以拨打电话:051385550055)
注意:
l、通知应包括以上所有信息,可适当发挥,具有一定的说服力.
2、词数:120左右.开头与结尾已写好,不计入总词数.
Good afternoon,everyone!In order to make our school life more colorful, .
Don't wait.Join us now!Thank you!
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息用英语准备一份口头通知,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:俱乐部的主要活动内容;参加俱乐部的好处;注意事项;如何加入俱乐部2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:if possible如果可能的话;keep fit保持健康; Besides另外;be interested in 对…感兴趣;
We have basic training once a week,which will be instructed by teachers.(高分句型一)
We are sure it will be an ideal place for you to make more friends,to experience the excitement of discovery,and to keep fit.(高分句型二)
解答 Good afternoon,everyone!In order to make our school life more colorful,the Student Union has decided to set up a Cycling Club.
Our Cycling Club will have a wide range of activities for members.We have basic training once a week,which will be instructed by teachers.(高分句型一) It will be arranged during the time of after-class physical activities.There will also be an outdoor cycling trip at the last weekend of each month.And we will have some races with other teams if possible.(主要活动内容)
We are sure it will be an ideal place for you to make more friends,to experience the excitement of discovery,and to keep fit.(高分句型二) Besides,if you are suffering the stress from study,it will be a great chance to relax yourself.(参加俱乐部的好处)
So,if you are interested in our club,just call us at 051385550055,or you can come to our club in Room 602,on the sixth floor,Building 5.By the way,you have to get the equipment ready by yourself,but the charge is free.(如何加入俱乐部)
Don't wait.Join us now!Thank you!
The Student Union
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.