Question

短文改错 (共10分,每小题1分,满分10分)

Last Sunday my father and I went fishing along a river. We found the water very dirty that we could hardly catch any fish in it. A lot of factories along the river always poured their waste water and rubbish straightly into the river, which made the river polluting. In this way most of the fish in the river was killed. Unless the rivers all over the country are polluted like this, no living things will be exist in the water. As we all know, environmental pollution do great harm to living things and human beings. Now more and more people have realized what serious this problem is. Our government is doing her best to take measure to fight against pollution. We expect that water in every river will be made cleaner and cleaner before long.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 very 改为  so (第二句) 

 straightly 改为  straight

 polluting 改为 polluted

 was 改为were   (第四句) 

 Unless 改为If；

 be去掉 （第五句）

 do 改为 does；

 what改为how

 measure改为measures

 在water前加the

【解析】

试题分析：

 very 改为  so (第二句) 考查的是so…that…句型，

 straightly 改为  straight ，考查副词：straight本身就是副词，不用加ly

 polluting 改为 polluted ，考查过去分词做宾语补足语，the river和pollute是被动关系。

 was 改为were   (第四句) 主语是most of the fish，这里的fish是“鱼”是可数名词，只是单复数同形，这里是复数，谓语也是复数

 Unless 改为If；句意：如果河流都被污染了，水里面就没有生物了。

 be去掉 （第五句）exist是不及物动词，不能用被动

 do 改为 does；主语是environmental pollution谓语是单数

 what改为how，考查感叹句，修饰形容词副词用how

 measure改为measures，考查名词，measure是可数名词用复数

 在water前加the ，特指in every river可知是the water

考点：考查短文改错

点评：本题考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑。