Question

17．假如你是李华，今年将要参加高考．你的老师和父母对你大学专业的选择提出异议，为此你很苦恼．请你根据提示，用英语给你的美国笔友Bob写一封邮件，谈谈你的想法，并征求笔友的建议．
1．父母的建议：法律专业（就业前景好）；
老师的建议：外语（充分发挥自己的语言天赋）；
你的想法：…
2．注意：1）词数100左右；
2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3）信的开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数．
Dear Bob，
I am at a loss nowadays．
My teacher and my parents have different opinions about my major in college．On the one hand，my parents say I should choose law as my major，who think that our society is in great need of skilled workers and experts in law and I will find a good job after graduation．（高分句型一）On the other hand，my teacher thinks I should specialize in a foreign language because I have the gift for learning and applying language，which will dig out my potential better．（高分句型二）Compared to their opinions，I am ready to major in finance because I feel that it will prepare me for a career in the world of business，let alone make more money．（高分句型三）
What should I do？
I am looking forward to your advice．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假如你是李华，今年将要参加高考．你的老师和父母对你大学专业的选择提出异议，为此你很苦恼．请你根据提示，用英语给你的美国笔友Bob写一封邮件，谈谈你的想法，并征求笔友的建议．写作时注意以下几点：仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：父母的建议：法律专业（就业前景好）；老师的建议：外语（充分发挥自己的语言天赋）；你的想法    2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：On the one hand一方面；in great need of 急需；On the other hand另一方面；have the gift for 有…的天赋；Compared to与…相比；let alone更不用说；
On the one hand，my parents say I should choose law as my major，who think that our society is in great need of skilled workers and experts in law and I will find a good job after graduation．（高分句型一）
On the other hand，my teacher thinks I should specialize in a foreign language because I have the gift for learning and applying language，which will dig out my potential better．（高分句型二）
Compared to their opinions，I am ready to major in finance because I feel that it will prepare me for a career in the world of business，let alone make more money．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Bob，
       I am at a loss nowadays． My teacher and my parents have different opinions about my major in college．On the one hand，my parents say I should choose law as my major，who think that our society is in great need of skilled workers and experts in law and I will find a good job after graduation．（高分句型一）On the other hand，my teacher thinks I should specialize in a foreign language because I have the gift for learning and applying language，which will dig out my potential better．（高分句型二）Compared to their opinions，I am ready to major in finance because I feel that it will prepare me for a career in the world of business，let alone make more money．（高分句型三）
     What should I do？
     I am looking forward to your advice．
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．