Question

假如你叫李华，你的英国朋友Jack来信说下学期要到你校学习，向你寻求建议。请你给Jack写回信，在下面几方面给出建议，并希望他在你们学校里过得愉快。

（1）与同学见面要主动向同学问好，并做自我介绍（姓名、国籍等）；

（2）多与别人交流，并友好相处；

（3）如果方便的话帮助同学学英语；

（4）积极参加一些学校活动，比如艺术节、运动会等；

（5）其他建议。

Dear Jack,

I’m glad to know you’ll come to our school next term.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Jack,

I’m glad to know you’ll come to our school next term. Here is my advice.

Firstly, please say hello to your classmates and introduce yourself about your name and nationality. Secondly, communicate with others frequently and get on well with them. Thirdly, help others study English if it is convenient to you. Besides, you can take an active part in the school activities such as a sports meeting or an art celebration. Last but not least, if you feel puzzled to adapt to the life in China, you can come and talk with me. I will do my best to help you whenever you are in trouble.

May you have a wonderful term in our school.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求给英国朋友Jack写回信，给Jack提一些建议，并希望他在你们学校里过得愉快。写作要点包括：主动向同学问好并做自我介绍；多与别人交流并友好相处；帮助同学学英语；积极参加学校活动和其它建议这五个方面。开头和结尾不计入总词数；不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性。

亮点说明：范文涵盖了所有的写作要点，进行了适当的拓展，并注意语句的连贯性；范文还使用了条件状语从句、让步状语从句等语法知识，具备较强的语言运用能力。

语法方面：条件状语从句①if it is convenient to you，②if you feel puzzled to adapt to the life in China；让步状语从句whenever you are in trouble等，语法知识运用较为娴熟，显示了较强的语法功底，也使作文句式变得多样；

篇章结构方面：范文注意使用firstly, secondly, thirdly, besides, last but not least等来衔接句子和段落，使表达变得更有条理；

短语和搭配方面：范文使用了say hello to, introduce oneself, communicate with, get on well with, take an active part in, such as, talk with, do one’s best to do等短语和搭配，使作文的内容变得充实。

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