Question

Sometime in February, my teacher told us about the city speech contest, its topic was “People who have overcome difficulties in their lives”. I thought of my grandma would be my perfect topic. Then I carefully prepared for contest. A couple of weeks later, after the first round I was choosing to be one of the seven finalists! The final was held soon. I was the sixth to presenting the speech. How a relief when I finished it! After the last person finished, the judge made their final decisions and announced that I have won first prize. The audience were going wildly clapping and cheering! I was extremely happy. It was such exciting a moment that I will always remember it.

 

Answer 1

1.its前加and 或把its改为whose或者删掉topic后的was

2.thought 后删of

3.for 后加the

4.choosing →chosen

5.presenting→ present

6.How→ What

7.judge →judges

8.have →had

9.wildly→ wild

10.such →so

【解析】

试题分析: 在本文中作者讲述了自己参加市演讲比赛的情况，演讲的话题是“People who have overcome difficulties in their lives”。作者认真地准备了这次演讲比赛，结果荣获了演讲比赛一等奖，他永远也不会忘记那一刻。

1.its前加and 或把its改为whose或者删掉topic后的was 。 its topic was “People who have overcome difficulties in their lives”.分析结构可知前后两个句子中间没连词，所以可以把its改为whose成为定语从句，也可以在its前加and构成并列句；也可以去掉topic成为独立主格，故答案是its 改为whose或 its前加and 或删topic后的was 。

2.thought 后删of 。I thought of my grandma would be my perfect topic. 介词of后只跟名词，代词动名词做宾语，不跟陈述句做宾语从句，故去掉of。

3.for 后加the 。 Then I carefully prepared for contest. 此处的contest是特指上文提到的演讲比赛，故前面加定冠词the。

4.choosing →chosen 。I was choosing to be one of the seven finalists! 句子主语I 和谓语动词之间是被动关系，应该用被动语态，所以把choosing改为chosen。

5.presenting→ present 。I was the sixth to presenting the speech. 修饰序数词the first、the second、the last等后面用动词不定式，所以把presenting改为present。

6.How→ What 。How a relief when I finished it ! 感叹句中对名词进行感叹需要用what，句型：what +（形容词）名词+主语+谓语，所以把How改为What。

7.judge →judges 。the judge made their final decisions. 根据句中的their decisions可以判断有多名裁判，故把judge改为judges。

8.have →had have →had and announced that I have won first prize. 主句谓语动词是一般过去时，宾语从句应该用过去时的相应形式，根据文章内容可以判断应该用过去完成时，故把have改为had。

9.wildly→ wild 。The audience were going wildly clapping and cheering ! 动词go在句中是系动词，后面应该跟形容词做表语，故把wildly改为wild。

10.such →so 。It was such exciting a moment that I will always remember it. 在such/so…..that句型中，such 修饰名词，so修饰形容词和副词，所以把such改为so。

考点：考查短文改错。