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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I am more than glad to tell you about my trip in Xi’an, a capital city of Shaanxi Province.

What impresses me deep is its natural scenery and long history. First, as it is known to the world, Xi’an has a long history and is the birthplace of Chinese civilization. Its cultural and historical significance of the area, as well as many historical sites, help Xi’an enjoy the title of “Natural History Museum”. The Terracotta Warriors, as example, are praised as “the eight wonder of the world”. Second, it is in a favorable geographical location surrounding by the Wei River and Qinling. I have also climbed Mount Hua, one of the five most famous mountains in China, what is famous for its breathtaking cliffs and unique characteristics.

It is really worthy visiting, and I’m looking forward to your coming.

Answer 1

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【解析】西安，陕西省的省会，应该是特指，不能用a。

使我印象最深的是它的自然风景和悠久历史。修饰impress 用副词deeply。

as it is known to the world, 此句中，as引导非限定性定语从句，as 在从句中做主语，it 多余。

不但是中国文明的发源地，文化和历史的重要意义以及很多历史遗迹。As well as 表示也，可连接并列成分，as well 不可以。

主谓一致。此句Its cultural and historical significance of the area, as well as many historical sites, help Xi’an enjoy the title of “Natural History Museum”. 中 as well as 连接并列主语，用就前原则，所以用单数。

例如是for example。

兵马俑被认为是世界第八大奇观，所以要用序数词。

此处被渭河和秦岭包围表被动关系，所以用过去分词。

I have also climbed Mount Hua, one of the five most famous mountains in China, what is famous for its breathtaking cliffs and unique characteristics. 此句的后半分局为定语从句，修饰先行词Mount Hua,从句中做主语用which ，不用what。

值得参观用it is worth doing， 不用worthy。