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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）。并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。

I was walking home late at night since I heard someone walking behind me. I looked back, but it was too darkness to see clearly. As soon as I heard the footsteps, so I started to feel nervous. Just then, I could hear a person behind me walking faster. I began to run and noticed a woman carried a bag was walking slowly in front of me. The moment I began to run, she did nothing but threw her bag, screaming. Then she turned to face me a look of terror on her face. When I saw this, I stopped running and tried to smile at them. At that moment, the person that footsteps had frightened me walked by, looking curiously at all of us.

Answer 1

【答案】1.since-when

2.darkness-dark

3.去so

4.a-the

5.carried- carrying/woman后加who/that

6.threw- throw

7.a look前加with

8.them-her

9.that-whose

10.all-both

【解析】文章主要讲述了一场误会。深夜作者走在路上被身后的脚步声吓到了，他便加快了脚步，没想到吓到了走在他前面的女士。

1.考查固定句型。句意：深夜我走在回家的路上时，我听到有人走在我后面。根据“be doing when”正在做…突然。故将since改为when。

2.考查形容词。句意：但它太黑，看不清楚。根据“too…to”结构中too修饰形容词或副词，故将名词darkness改为dark。

3.考查连词。句意：一听到脚步声就很紧张。As soon as一…就，引导状语从句，故将主句中的so去掉。

4.考查冠词。句意：我听到我身后的人走得更快了。behind me作定语修饰person，故将不定冠词a改为定冠词the表特指。

5.考查动名词作定语/定语从句。句意：我开始跑了，注意到一个提着包的女人在我前面慢慢地走着。Woman与动词carry之间处于主动关系，应为现在分词作定语，故将carried改为carrying；或在woman后添加关系词who/that引导定语从句。

6.考查动词时态。句意：我一开始跑，她就什么都没做除了尖叫着扔了她的包。文章描述的是过去发生的事情，应使用一般过去时，故将threw改为throw。

7.考查介词。句意：然后她转身面对我，一脸惊恐的表情。With a look of terror惊恐的表情，做伴随状语。故填加介词with。

8.考查考查代词。句意：当我看到这，我停了下来，试着向她微笑。根据“Then she turned to face me with a look of terror on her face.” 后她转身面对我，一脸惊恐的表情。可知，故将them改为her。

9.考查定语从句中代词的使用。句意：那一刻，那个脚步吓着我的人走过来，好奇地看着我们两个。定语从句中修饰名词footsteps应使用形容词性关系词whose。

10.考查代词。句意：那一刻，那个脚步吓着我的人走过来，好奇地看着我们两个。All三个或三个以上，both指两个人。故将all改为both。