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15．假定你是某中学高三学生李华，听说某中外合作办学大学招收广东高中毕业生，有意申请到该校英语系学习．请根据信息，用英语写一封自荐信．要点如下：主要说明个人教育背景、兴趣爱好和专长、选择课程及理由
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头、结语已为你写好．
假定你是某中学高三学生李华，听说某中外合作办学大学招收广东高中毕业生，有意申请到该校英语系学习．请根据信息，用英语写一封自荐信．要点如下：
主要说明个人教育背景、兴趣爱好和专长、选择课程及理由
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头、结语已为你写好．
Dear Sir/Madame，
I'm Lihua，a senior student who will graduate from Guangdong province this June．
I am writing thisletter in purpose of applying for admission into the English Department in youresteemed university and I'm confident I will meet your both academic and language requirements．（高分句型一）
During the past three years in senior school，I have not only grasped the principal skills of all subjectsbut more importantly developed a strong interest in language and English culture．（高分句型二）My ability to write and speak English is out of questionso that there will be little problem in attending the courses given by foreign teachers．Besides，your university in"cross-cultural education"，especially the global community of international students as well as the academic staff from differentcountries，are of particular interest to me．That's why I seek entry to your university．
I will appreciate it very much if my application can be taken into considerationand lookforward to your reply．（高分句型三）
Yours sincerely
Lihua．
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假定你是某中学高三学生李华，听说某中外合作办学大学招收广东高中毕业生，有意申请到该校英语系学习．请根据信息，用英语写一封自荐信．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：主要说明个人教育背景、兴趣爱好和专长、选择课程及理由
2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：apply for申请；not only，but （also）不仅，而且；out of question毫无疑问；Besides另外；as well as也，和；look forward to 盼望；
I am writing this letter in purpose of applying for admission into the English Department in your esteemed university and I'm confident I will meet your both academic and language requirements．（高分句型一）
During the past three years in senior school，I have not only grasped the principal skills of all subjects but more importantly developed a strong interest in language and English culture．（高分句型二）
I will appreciate it very much if my application can be taken into consideration and look forward to your reply．（高分句型三）
解答 Dear Sir/Madame，
I'm Lihua，a senior 3 student who will graduate from Guangdong province this june． I am writing this letter in purpose of applying for admission into the English Department in your esteemed university and I'm confident I will meet your both academic and language requirements．（高分句型一）
During the past three years in senior school，I have not only grasped the principal skills of all subjects but more importantly developed a strong interest in language and English culture．（高分句型二）My ability to write and speak English is out of question so that there will be little problem in attending the courses given by foreign teachers．Besides，your university in"cross-cultural education"，especially the global community of international students as well as the academic staff from different countries，are of particular interest to me．That's why I seek entry to your university．
I will appreciate it very much if my application can be taken into consideration and look forward to your reply．（高分句型三）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．
