Question

校学生会正在面向全校师生征集创建绿色校园活动的建议。下面是一些已经征集到的建议，请你为校报写一篇英文报道。

Creating a Green Campus

1.绿化环境，多植树种草，愉悦身心；

2.保护环境，尽可能少使用塑料制品等，减少白色污染；

3.考试不作弊，不抄袭作业，不浏览不健康网站。

你的建议……

要求：

1．不要逐词翻译，可适当拓展，以使行文连贯、流畅；

2．开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

3．词数：100词左右。

83．请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。

We meet a lot of difficulities in our daily life.when problems arise ,do you give up or take a positive attitude towards them? Talk about your opinions.

注意：①无须写标题； ②除诗歌外，文体不限；

③内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例；

④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;

⑤词数为120左右，如引用提示语则不计入总字数。

(提示:请将写作答案写在答题卡上的相应位置，写在此处无效。）

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Recently the students' union of our school has been collecting suggestions entitled Creating a Green Campus among all the teachers and students. The followings are some of the good ones from them. Firstly more trees, flowers and grass should be planted in the campus, which can not only make the school look more beautiful but also let the teachers and students feel happier. Secondly we should use plastic bags and bottles as few as possible to reduce the white pollution. Thirdly we ought not to cheat in exams, copy homework from others or surf some unhealthy websites, which is also considered as an important part of creating a green campus.

I suggest that we should form good habits of turning off the lights as we leave school and not wasting water. If everyone can make contributions to these above, I believe we can create a really green campus.

【解析】

本书面表达是一篇提纲作文。提纲作文写作的时候注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯

【亮点说明】范文中出现一些比较好的短语as few as possible to do 尽可能做某事；form the habit of 养成。。习惯；turn off关；make contributions to 致力于；more trees, flowers and grass should be planted in the campus, which can not only make the school look more beautiful but also let the teachers and students feel happier.在这个句子中which引导一个非限制性定语从句，not only but also连接两个并列的谓语动词；Thirdly we ought not to cheat in exams, copy homework from others or surf some unhealthy websites, which is also considered as an important part of creating a green campus这个句子中不仅仅提到非限制性定语从句，还考查到consider的被动语态；

考点： 提纲类作文