题目内容
1.假设你是李华,就读于某双语学校.你校学生会打算招聘一名志愿者每周日去学校附近的敬老院教老年人学英语.请你参照以下要点提示,用英语给学生会负责人王老师写-封信,竞聘此
职位.
要点:
1.你的个人情况;
2.你对此活动的认识;
3.你能胜任此工作的原因(英语水平、工作能力、性格等)
要求:
1.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
2.词数不少于100.
参考词汇:学生会Students'Union 敬老院nursing home
Dear Mrs.Wang,
I am Li Hua.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua.
分析 本篇书面表达属于英文书信,根据提示信息用英语给学生会负责人王老师写-封信.写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:你的个人情况;你对此活动的认识;你能胜任此工作的原因(英语水平、工作能力、性格等)2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:As far as I am concerned以我的观点来看;not only…but also…不仅…而且;meet the requirements满足要求;Besides另外;devote myself to致力于
解答 Dear Mrs.Wang,
I'm Li Hua,a Senior 3 student in our school.I have learned that the Students'Union is recruiting volunteers to teach English in the nearby nursing home.I hope to be a member of this team.
As far as I am concerned,the activity is very meaningful,because I will not only be able to teach the old people English,but also have an opportunity to learn from them.(高分句型)I think I am competent enough to meet the requirements.(高分句型)First,I am good at English speaking and writing.Besides,I have also been a volunteer to help disabled children learn English in a special education school,so I know how to teach others.(高分句型) If the chance is given to me,I will treasure it and devote myself to the job.(高分句型)
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
点评 应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯,比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词,使文章流畅、通顺,并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感.(1)认真审题,确定体裁. (2)构思要点.根据题目要求,理解要表达的要点.设计好文章的层次段落,考虑所用时态、人称等,把要点串联起来,构成文章框架.(3)选词造句,避难选易.(4)认真检查,避免错误.仔细阅读全文,查找是否有错,注意时态、单词拼写、字母大小写、标点是否有误,句式是否正确.逻辑是否一致.
| A. | intention | B. | determination | C. | concern | D. | development |
| A. | close; close | B. | closely; closely | ||
| C. | closely; close | D. | close; closely |
"Hey,look!"exclaimed Rahim."Those two men are(42)B heavy rocks.I thought we no longer do muscle labour in this technological (43)D".
"You don't (44)B a crane(起重机)to unload less than a dozen rocks,do you?"smiled Joshua.
"But those men don't (45)D to have muscles at all."said Michael,rather surprised.Joshua smiled.
"They are(46)B labourers who know how to spread the weight of the rocks they(47)C.See how the man positions the rock just at the slope of his (48)A.Some of the rock's weight is set (49)Bhis head,some on the right hand and some on the left hand.His body isn't bent.His legs are well(50)C."
"You're right,Josh.He may have a small build,(51)A he certainly knows his job well.Dear me!And to think we have been studying (52)B!"Rahim thought about all that was happening.Suddenly,he said,"Technology won't (53)D the human being completely,it appears."
"I don't think it will."(54)A Joshua."You can harvest a crop of potatoes or wheat with one of those large,multi-purpose tractors,but you (55)Cuse that equipment to harvest tea leaves and tomatoes,will you?"
"You can get a computer to (56)Dmultiple-choice assessments,but you cannot get the computer to produce or assess essays,can you?"asked Michael.
"Well,the washing machine leaves my shirt collar quite as (57)Aas ever-that's domestic technology for you!"said Rahim.
"One day,perhaps,there won't be anybody (58)Cwho can carry a large rock the way those men do.It's not going to be a very (59)Aworld,I'm afraid."sighed Michael.
"You're too much of a pessimist,Mike."said Joshua."(60)D will always be other things that will make the world exciting."
| 41.A.through | B.across | C.down | D.up |
| 42.A.loading | B.unloading | C.covering | D.uncovering |
| 43.A.way | B.revolution | C.process | D.time |
| 44.A.ask | B.expect | C.attempt | D.hope |
| 45.A.happen | B.fail | C.have | D.seem |
| 46.A.ambitious | B.experienced | C.potential | D.energetic |
| 47.A.take | B.fetch | C.bother | D.bring |
| 48.A.shoulder | B.back | C.chest | D.arms |
| 49.A.on | B.against | C.toward | D.under |
| 50.A.supported | B.grasped | C.placed | D.strengthened |
| 51.A.but | B.however | C.so | D.therefore |
| 52.A.chemistry | B.physics | C.biology | D.psychology |
| 53.A.control | B.affect | C.remove | D.replace |
| 54.A.agreed | B.proposed | C.refused | D.denied |
| 55.A.can't | B.mustn't | C.won't | D.needn't |
| 56.A.point out | B.take out | C.hand out | D.print out |
| 57.A.dirty | B.clean | C.old | D.new |
| 58.A.caught | B.arranged | C.left | D.convinced |
| 59.A.exciting | B.mysterious | C.technological | D.modern |
| 60.A.That | B.This | C.They | D.There. |