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13．假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起） 不计分．

Yesterday，I saw the old lady fall down when I was hurrying to school．I was about to help her up while suddenly a passer-by stop me，saying that I might be accused of knocking her down．Heard his words，I began to hesitate and slowed down my steps．At the same time，another student，that saw everything，went up to help．The old lady said nothing but lots of thank to the good boy．I felt ashamed．
As is know to all，helping others is forever a good virtue．Even though some old people are becoming immorally，we can't let it to disappear．I have made my mind to reach out my hand without hesitation next time．

分析 昨天我在匆忙去学校的路上，看到一位老太太摔倒了，我正准备去帮她，就在那时，一位行人经过，告诉我也许会被指控是我撞倒她的．听到这样的话，我犹豫了．这时，另一个学生过来帮忙．老太太一个劲的感谢这个好孩子，我惭愧极了．众所周知，助人为乐是美德．即使有些老人人品有问题，故意碰瓷，我们也不能让这种美德消失．我决定下次会毫不犹豫地帮助别人．

解答 Yesterday，I saw the old lady fall down when I was hurrying to school．I was 
                           an
about to help her up while suddenly a passer-by stop me，saying that I might be
                               when                                stopped
accused of knocking her down．Heardhis words，I began to hesitate and slowed down
                                              Hearing
my steps．At the same time，another student，that saw everything，went up to help．The
                                                                      who
old lady said nothing but lots of thank to the good boy．I felt ashamed．
                                               thanks
As is knowto all，helping others is forever a good virtue．Even though some old          
        known         
people are becoming immorally，we can't let it to disappear．I have made∧my mind
                               immoral                            去掉                               加up
to reach out my hand without hesitation next time．
1．the改为an．题干表达的是泛指，要用不定冠词．
2．while改为when．句意表达的是正在那时，要用when，相当于at that time．
3．stop改为stopped．文章讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
4．Heard改为Hearing．分词作状语，Hear与主语I构成主动关系，要用现在分词．
5．that改为who．非限制性定语从句，不能用that来引导．指人的要用who．
6．thank改为thanks．题干中thank前有量词lots of修饰，要用名词的复数形式．
7．know改为known．句型搭配，as is known to all众所周知．
8．immorally改为immoral．题干中immoral是用来作系动词becoming的表语，要用形容词．
9．to去掉．短语搭配，let sb do sth让某人做某事，使役动词后要接动词原形．
10．加up．短语搭配，make up one's mind下定决心．

点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．

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增加：在缺词处加上一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
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                                            the                         am
completely free then，so I'll to say"yes"．I'll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday                                                             on
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：（1）．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
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Wildlife
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     D．Stop at Mather and Desert View campgrounds．
37．What do the underlined words"pack out What you pack in"in Paragraph 4
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     B．take away everything you bring in
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     D．They kicked and bit visitors．
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     D．Lightning and floods both cause danger．
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    C．To teach tourists hiking skills..D．To introduce the wildlife．

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