Question

假若你是某高中学生李华，进入高中后， 你觉得学英语课文的方式与初中有很大的不同。 你给自己的初中英语老师写了一封信，介绍自己高中英语学习情况。内容如下：
1.开始学习高中英语时，觉得英语课文比初中要难得多，几乎丧失信心。
2.后来，向老师和同学请教学习英语课文的方法。在他们的帮助和鼓励（encouragement）之下，我取得了很大的进步，现在对英语阅读越来越感兴趣。
3.每天努力背英语词汇，多读课文，多训练阅读等。
注意：
1. 信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 应包括以上要点，但不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
3. 词数：100左右。
Dear Miss Wang,
I’m very happy to tell you that ___________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________
Wish you all the best.
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Miss Wang,
I’m very happy to tell you that I have made great progress in learning Senior English texts since I entered senior school.
In the beginning, I found it much more difficult to read and understand English texts than we did in Junior school and I almost lost heart. Later, I asked my teachers and classmates for ways of learning texts. It is their help and encouragement that help me improve my reading comprehending. Now I have gradually realized the importance of reading English texts. Moreover, I’m getting more and more interested in English learning, so I work hard every day to recite new words and texts and practise reading as often as possible.
I am determined to learn English well and I am sure I will make greater progress in Senior School.
Wish you all the best.
Yours,
Li Hua

试题分析：考查提纲类书面表达：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮点说明】范文出现很多常见的词组：ways of doing“做…的方法”，. realize the importance of “意识到…的重要性”，getting more and more interested in “越来越感兴趣”，practise doing练习做…， as often as possible尽可能经常，. am determined to 决心做…，make greater progress取得更大的成功，还有使用了一些句型： I found it much more difficult to read and understand English texts than we did in Junior school and I almost lost heart. It is their help and encouragement that help me improve my reading comprehending.强调句 还有范文还使用了In the beginning, Moreover,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。