Question

Mary是一位美国女学生，去年来到你校。你跟她相处很好，不久便成了朋友。Mary对汉语有浓厚的兴趣，汉语讲得好；她擅长数学，勤于作业；化学课上喜欢做实验，但有时粗心大意；物理是她最喜欢的学科之一，成绩优秀；她乐于助人，大家都非常喜欢她。
请你用英语写一篇以A friend of mine为题的短文，要求100词左右。
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Answer 1

A Friend of Mine
Mary, who is a girl with good manners, came to our school last year. She is always ready to help others and therefore gets along very well with everyone else in her class, and we have made friends with each other.
Having a special interest in Chinese, Mary speaks the language very well. She does plenty of math exercises every day and is very good at the subject. She enjoys doing experiments in Chemistry, though sometimes she needs to be more careful. Physics is her favorite subject and she is one of the best students in this subject and her physics teacher is proud of her.
We love her very much.

试题分析：考查提纲类书面表达：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮点说明】范文出现很多常见的词组：Be ready to 乐于做…，gets along very well with 和…相处，made friends with 和…交朋友，be proud of 以…为荣，还有使用了一些句型：Mary, who is a girl with good manners, came to our school last year. 这句话用了定语从句， Having a special interest in Chinese, Mary speaks the language very well. 这句话用了现在分词做状语， She enjoys doing experiments in Chemistry, though sometimes she needs to be more careful. 这句话用了让步状语从句。