Question

6．英文网站Teens开展主题为"My biggest challenge in high school"的征文活动．请根据以下要点提示，写一篇100词左右的英语短文参加该活动．
1．描述你在高中生活中所遇到的最大挑战；
2．介绍你的应对措施及感悟．
注意：文章中不要出现个人真实信息．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一篇征文．主题为"My biggest challenge in high school"．写作要点包括：1．描述你在高中生活中遇到的最大挑战； 2．介绍你的应对措施及感悟．
写作时时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第一和第三人称为主．
重要短语：come across（新发行/发布的产品），impress sb （一系列），get along with （与…相处），be anxious about （焦虑），turn to sb for help （求助某人），take part in （参加），build up one'sconfidence （建立自信），communicate with （与…交流），become popular among …（上市），learn from（向…学习），try our best to （努力做某事）．
【高分句型】

1．As a high school student，I came across a lot of challenges，one of which impressed me most．
这里是"介词+关系代词"引导的非限制性定语从句，which指代前面的challenges，one of which在从句中作主语．
2．It was when I started my high school life that I found it hard to get along with my new classmates．
这里是强调句型．结构为"It was+强调部分+that…"，在此句中强调的是when引导的时间状语从句．
3．I started to take part in various school activities，in which I came to build up my confidence in communicating with my classmates．
这里是in which引导的非现在性定语从句．in which在句中作地点状语，指代前面先行词activities．

解答 My biggest challenge in high school
As a high school student，I came across a lotof challenges，one of which impressed me most．【高分句型】It was when Istarted my high school life that I found it hard to get along with my newclassmates．【高分句型】I felt very anxious about it．However，I didn't let it be．（描述高中生活中遇到的最大挑战）
I turned to my head teacher for help．He gaveme some valuable advice．I started to take part in various school activities，in which I came to build up my confidence in communicating with my classmates．【高分句型】Gradually，Imade some friends and became popular among them，which made me happy again．Ilearned from the experience that whatever difficulties we need，we should tryour best to solve them．Only in this way，can we have a better life．（应对措施及感悟）

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．