题目内容
15.假如你是高一学生李华,发现你班上越来越多的同学使用手机,甚至影响了学习.请你就这个现象,向某英语报社编辑写一封信,提出自己的看法.内容包括:
1、手机的用途;
2、手机的负作用;
3、你的看法.
注意:
1.短文应包括所提示的内容,适当发挥;
2.要求书写清楚,句子通顺,语法正确;
3.文中不要出现真实的姓名和学校;
4.字数100词左右;信得开头和结尾已给出,不计入字数.
Dear Editor,
I am a Senior One student.In our class,more and more students go to school with mobile phones.
.
Yours
Li Hua.
分析 这是一篇提纲作文,让我们就越来越多的同学使用手机,甚至影响了学习这个现象,向某英语报社编辑写一封信,提出自己的看法,这需要我们发挥英语思维,将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来.写作需要用第一人称,时态主要是一般现在时,内容要点包括:手机的用途;手机的负作用;你的看法.我们此篇作文分为两部分,第一部分为提出问题.第二部分为手机的用途及负作用.第三部分为作者的看法.
重点短语与句型:
be popular among 受欢迎
keep in touch with 保持联系
have fun玩的开心
pay attention to 注意
高分句型一:Using mobile phone,they can keep in touch with their friends and families wherever they are.此句用了现在分词作伴随状语以及wherever引导地点状语从句
高分句型二:However,there are some problems with using mobile phones,one of which is that the ring of phones can disturb teachers and students in the classroom.此句用了定语从句以及表语从句.
解答 Dear Editor,
I am a Senior One student.In our class,more and more students go to school with mobile phones.(提出问题)
Mobile phones are very popular among students.Using mobile phone,they can keep in touch with their friends and families wherever they are(高分句型一).Besides,the mobile phone is a way to have fun.However,there are some problems with using mobile phones,one of which is that the ring of phones can disturb teachers and students in the classroom(高分句型二).Some students spend too much time and money in sending messages,playing games or even cheating in exams.(手机的用途及负作用 )
Personlly,students should not use mobile phones in class,play games or cheat in exams.They should pay more attention to their lessons.Also because it is expensive,the owner should take good care of it.(作者的看法)
Yours
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
| A. | whether | B. | that | C. | which | D. | why |
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"The program tries to bring something new by presenting more cultural elements related to dishes,like eating habits of eating."
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Title:A Hit about Chinese Food
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