假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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15．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Alice，
I was delighted to receive your letter．Thank you on the English dictionary you bought it for me．I received it this morning．There is no doubt which it is of great help to me．I'm deep grateful for your advice that I should pay more attentions to practising my spoken English．I've made up my mind to speak English both in and out of class．Next month I'll take trip to Australia，which is organizing by my school．I hope I can practise my spoken English there as many as possible．By the way，I am sending you a set of stamps with this letter，but I'll send you more if I got any．I do hope you will have a good holiday．
Yours，
Li Hu．

分析这是写给朋友 Alice的一封信．
感谢你给我的字典，毫无疑问这对我很有帮助，同时非常感激你多注意练习英语口语的建议．下个月我要到澳大利亚旅行，这是我们学校组织的．随信寄给你一套邮票，如果你喜欢的话，我会给你更多．

解答 Dear Alice，
I was delighted to receive your letter．Thank you on the English dictionary you bought it for me．I received it this morning．There is no doubt which it is of great help to me．I'm deep grateful for your advice that I should pay more attentions to practising my spoken English．I've made up my mind to speak English both in and out of class．Next month I'll take∧trip to Australia，which is organizing by my school．I hope I can practise my spoken English there as many as possible．By the way，I am sending you a set of stamps with this letter，but I'll send you more if I got any．I do hope you will have a good holiday．
解析：
1．on改成 for．考查介词．固定句式Thank you for…，表示"因为…而感谢某人"，所以on改成 for
2．去掉it．考查定语从句．这句话是定语从句，关系词that/which代指先行词dictionary，在定语从句中做宾语，所以可以省略了．因此it和关系词重复了，所以去掉it．
3．which改成 that．考查固定句式．本句表示"毫无疑问这对我很有帮助"，所以用固定句型：There is no doubt that…．，因此which改成 that
4．deep改为deeply．考查副词的用法．应该用副词deeply修饰形容词grateful．
5．attentions改为attention．考查名词．attention是不可数名词，所以不用复数．pay attention to表示"注意"．
6．trip 前加a．考查冠词．表示"进行一次旅行"用Take a trip．
7．organizing 改为organized．考查被动语态．本句表示"这是我们学校组织的"，主语Trip和谓语动词organize是被动关系，所以用organized．
8．many改为 much．本句表示"我要尽可能多的练习英语口语"，所以表示程度用 much．
9．but改成 and．考查连词．这两句表示"随信寄给你一套邮票，如果有的话，我会给你更多"．所以这里是并列关系，因此but改成 and
10．got 改成get．考查谓语动词的时态．主句I'll send you more用一般将来时，所以 if 从句用一般现在时，因此got 改成get．

点评考查短文改错．
答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致．各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用．一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考查的就是我们的基础知识．平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构．

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3．I went to Arizona earlier this month to see what the college of the future might look like．What I found is an exciting new era of higher education that will help more students get a great，personalized education at an affordable price．
This future may not always include the lecture halls，dormitories，and other features of the traditional college experience．Instead，the colleges I visited are experimenting with ways for students to get their degrees online，allowing them to take courses any place and at any time．
These"colleges without walls，"as they are sometimes called，are at the forefront of the effort to broaden access to higher education，especially for low-income students with full-time jobs and families．During my visit，I heard encouraging stories of students who were taking advantage of these flexible learning models to pursue degrees that could put them on paths to new careers．
One of those students was Shawn Lee．He had a compelling story：After dropping out of college decades ago，he found himself in a series of low-paying，often back-breaking jobs．He recently decided to get his degree when he had his first child and wanted to start building a better life．
Tucked away in an industrial park in Tempe，Rio Salado didn't look much like a traditional institute of higher education．There were no students running to class．Just a couple of glass-faced office buildings．The college had just 22full-time faculty serving 60，000students，with more than half of them attending classes online．
Several students I met during my visit said they liked learning online．"I've taken college classes in a big auditorium with herds of people．There was no personal connection，"one student said．"Now I can reach my teacher with the click of a mouse．"
After several days'visit，I left Arizona feeling quite optimistic about what the future holds for higher education．

32．What does"colleges without walls"in the third paragraph refer to？B
A．Colleges that have no walls around．
B．Colleges that students attend online．
C．Colleges that can be entered freely．
D．Colleges that give students more freedom．
33．What made Shawn Lee return to attend college again？D
A．That he has nothing to do．
B．That he couldn't find a job．
C．That the cost of the college is low．
D．That he wanted to find a better job．
34．How did the writer feel after the visit？A
A．Hopeful．
B．Dissatisfied．
C．Disappointed．
D．Upset．
35．What is the writer's purpose by writing this passage？D
A．To explain what"colleges without walls"are．
B．To advertise the colleges．
C．To encourage people to attend higher education．
D．To introduce a new model of education．

10．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
There is a good news for you．Anyone visited Beijing will soon be able to visit the Forbidden City at night．The Palace Museum plans to extend their opening hours to make it more conveniently for tourists．Parts of the museum will stay open until night to allow more people experience China's traditional culture before working hours．In addition，visitors will have access for more area soon after the renovation （修缮） work is completed this year．Nearly 65% of the Palace Museum will then be open to visitors to mark the 90thanniversary of the museum．The Forbidden City，that was built at the beginning of the Ming Dynasty，had undergone extensive renovations over the past 10 years．

4．______ nice and delicious，the roast turkey in this shop are always sold out soon．（　　）

11．

Films in West-city Cinema this week
A WORLD WITHOUT THIEVES •Chinese film •Dircected （导演） by Feng Xiaogang •Mainly acted by Liu Dehua，Liu Ruoying， Ge You，Li Bingbing •From Monday to Wednesday， at 8：00 p．m． •Ticket Price：RMB¥35	KUNGFU　HUSTLE •Chinese Hong Kong film •Directed by Zhou Xingchi •Mainly acted by Zhou Xingchi，Yuan Hua，Liang Xiaolong •From Wednesday to Friday， at 8：00 p．m． •Ticket price：RMB¥40
HARRY POTTER （III） •American film•Directed by Alfonso Cuaron •Mainly acted by Daniel Radcliffe，Rupert Grint．Emma Waston •From Friday to Sunday，at 7：30 p．m． •Ticket Price：RMB¥30 （Half on Sunday for children）	TROY •American film •Directed by Wolfgang Petersen •Mainly acted by Julian Glover，Brian Cox， Nathan Jones，Adoni Maropis •From Tuesday to Thursday， at 8：00 p．m． •Ticket Price_：RMB¥45

41．If you want to see the film which was directed by Feng Xiaogang，go to the cinema EXCEPT onB．
A．Monday
B．Thursday
C．Wednesday
D．Tuesd
42．Now Daming is free on Thursday，And he has 45yuan in his pocket，So he can see the filmD
A．Troy and Harry Potter
B．Harry Potter and A World Without Thieves
C．A World Without Thieves and Kungfu Hustle
D．Kungfu Hustle and Troy
43．Mr Green and his wife can payC when they want to see a film with their 10-year-old son on Sunday．
A．¥65
B．¥70
C．¥75
D．¥80
44．You can seeB foreign films in West-city Cinema this week．
A．one
B．two
C．three
D．four
45．Which of the following is TRUE？D
A．Liu Dehua acted in the film Kungfu Hustle．
B．The ticket price of the four films is the same．
C．All the films start after 8o'clock in the evening．
D．The four films were released in the same year．

8．During the past Spring Festival，many children may have received red packets from their families．But Xing Pu，a 40-year-old economist，is asking the government to give red packets to every Chinese citizen．
Xing suggested the government give out 1，000 yuan to each Chinese since the government income has increased rapidly in recent years．He said his suggestion would allow everyone to directly enjoy the fruits of the country's economic success，help the lower-income groups deal with rising prices and increase consumption（消费）around the country．
Recent years have seen the government carry out a series of pro-poor （扶贫） and pro-rural（惠农）policies，including increasing spending on public health care and calling off the agricultural tax．But the lower-income group still needs more help while being hit hard by an 11-year high in prices and recent snowstorms．
Xing said while making the draft，he has borrowed many ideas from practices in countries like the United States and Singapore．Earlier this year，the governments of the two nations offered cash handouts（救济）to their citizens as the result of a surplus in government income．As for in China，"We can even encourage the rich to donate their 1，000 yuan red packet to the poor，"said Xing．
Although Xing's suggestion has gained wide support among ordinary Chinese on the Internet，many other economists criticized it as unpractical．Even Xing himself admitted he made the suggestion without any careful calculation．But they agreed with Xing's point that the growing economic pie should be shared among the people．
"To better use the increase of money，handing out money is not a solution that holds good for all time．It could be better to improve the public service or cut the price of energy use in daily life，"said Qiao Xinsheng，an economic professor．
25．What has the government done to help the lower-income group？B
A．Spending less on public health care．
B．Carrying out pro-poor policies．
C．Handing out money to every Chinese．
D．Increasing the agricultural tax．
26．According to some experts，what is better than giving out money？D
A．Supplying food to everyone every day．
B．Increasing the government income．
C．Controlling the rising of prices．
D．Cutting the price of energy use in daily life．
27．Xing Pu's ideas of giving red packets to every Chinese citizen mainly came fromA．
A．the US and Singapore governments offering cash handouts to their citizens
B．children receiving red packets from their families
C．the government's increasing spending on public health care
D．the rising prices in the country．

9．Education is not an end，but a means to an end．In other words，we do not educate children only for the purpose of educating them．Our purpose is to fit them for life．
In some modern countries it has for some time been fashionable to think that by free education for all-whether rich or poor，clever or stupid-one can solve all the problems of society and build a perfect nation．But we can already see that free education for all is not enough； we find in such countries a far larger number of people with university degrees refuse to do what they think to be"low"work，and，in fact，work with hands is thought to be dirty and shameful in such countries．But we have only to think a moment to understand that the work of a completely uneducated farmer is far more important than that of a professor．We can live without education，but we die if we have no food．If no one cleaned our streets and took the rubbish away from our houses，we should get terrible diseases in our towns．
In fact，when we say that all of us must be educated to fit us for life，it means that we must be educated in such a way that，firstly，each of us can do whatever work suited to his brains and ability and，secondly，that we can realize that all jobs are necessary to society，and that is very bad to be ashamed of one's work．Only such a type of education can be considered valuable to society．

33．According to the passage，the purpose of education isD．
A．to build a perfect world
B．to choose a system of education
C．to let everyone receive education fit for him
D．to prepare children mainly for their future work
34．Which of the following is true according to the passage？C
A．It's hard for university graduates to find jobs．
B．No one would like to do work with hands．
C．Education is not enough to build a perfect nation．
D．University graduates are ashamed of their work．
35．In the writer's opinion，A．
A．all the social problems can't be solved by education
B．free education for all probably leads to a perfect world
C．free education won't help to solve social problems
D．education can settle all of the world's problems．

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