题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假设你是李华。上个月你从某国外网店订购了一件衬衫、一件外套和一条裤子。收到货后,你发现衬衫不是你要的尺码而且少了一粒纽扣,外套上有个小洞,裤子不是你要的颜色。请给该网店客服写封投诉信,内容主要包括:
1. 出现的问题;
2. 你期望的解决方案;
3. 希望能尽快得到回复。
注意:
1. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);
3. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
参考词汇: button (纽扣) order (定货;定单) refund (退款)
Dear Sir\Madam,
I’m writing to make a complaint about
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir\Madam,
I’m writing to make a complaint about a shirt, a coat and a pair of trousers which I bought from your online shop last month.
Unfortunately, when the order (定货) arrived I realized that the shirt had a button(纽扣) missing and was not the size I had ordered. In addition, when I tried on the coat, I noticed that it had a hole in it. What’s worse, the color of the trousers was not what I had asked for either.
On the whole, I am not satisfied with your goods. I would like you to either change the order or give me a full refund (退款).
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:考查半开放作文。本文要求以李华的身份给网店客服写投诉信,投诉所购买衬衫的质量问题。所以本文使用第一人称,交叉使用一般现在时和过去时。要点:1.购买产品存在问题:上个月从外网店订购了一件衬衫、一件外套和一条裤子。收到货后,发现衬衫不是你要的尺码而且少了一粒纽扣,外套上有个小洞,裤子不是所要的颜色。2.你期待的解决方案:换货或者退款;3. 希望能尽快得到回复。建议文章分成三段,三点各成一段。写作时,注意运用写作技巧,多使用高级词汇和高级句式。