题目内容
【题目】美国某中学举办英语寒假训练营,开设以下课程 cooking, swimming, giving first aid,playing football / basketball。假定你是李华,请你写封申请信,报名参加其中一门课程的学习。
内容包括:
1.你感兴趣的一门课程;
2.为什么想学这门课程;
3.你期望从中学到什么。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Lihua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I am more than delighted to hear that your school will start an English Winter Camp which includes a variety of courses, such as cooking, swimming, giving first aid, playing football or basketball I am interested in giving first aid and I am writing to sign up for the course.
I choose to attend the courses due to the fact that first aid is of great importance to people. If a person gets injured and needs medical care before a doctor can be called in, every second counts in saving life, in which case the knowledge of first aid can help save lives. Besides, I plan to study medicine and devote my life to medical research. Hopefully, the course will help me to learn about how to deal with medical emergencies.
I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封申请信,报名参加寒假训练营的课程。
第一步:审题
体裁:一般性应用文——书信
格式:格式是书信,要写明写信的对象(即称呼)和写信人(即署名),正文前可适当添加问候语,还要有结尾语
要点:要包括三个要点——感兴趣的课程、为什么要学和期望从中得到什么。
结构:为什么学和期望得到什么应是重点表述的。先给出自己的选择——对哪门课程感兴趣。
第二步:列提纲(重点短语和词汇)
be interested in ,sign up for the course,attend,be of great importance to people,save live(s), deal with medical emergencies,
第三步:连词成句
注意时态是一般现在时,表达为什么学要语气坚定,表达感谢要委婉。
第四步:连句成篇
第五步:润色修改