Question

假定你是李华，因陪母亲看病，不能参加明天下午关于美国文化的讲座。请你写一封电子邮件向老师Miss Clinton 请假。

内容主要包括：

不能听讲座， 向老师表示歉意；

向老师陈述缺席理由；

询问老师是否有讲座录音或影像，以便日后补听讲座、

注意： 1. 词数100 左右

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Miss Clinton，

I am very sorry that___________________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear Miss Clinton,

I am very sorry that I will not be able to attend the lecture tomorrow afternoon, which is on American culture.

My mother is ill, and I will take her to hospital tomorrow since my father is on a business trip. I will take care of my mother until she is better, so I have to ask for several days’ leave. I am very interested in the topic of American culture. It is nearly a pity that I miss it. I wonder if there will be any recording of the lecture. If so, I can listen to it when it is convenient.

Thank you very much.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是书信类作文，写一封电子邮件向老师Miss Clinton 请假，文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，而且很具体，考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏。在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。

【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，应用了一些较好的词组和句子：take care of 照料，ask for several days’ leave请几天假.I am very sorry that I will not be able to attend the lecture tomorrow afternoon, which is on American culture.这句话用了非限制性定语从句， It is nearly a pity that I miss it. 这句话用了it做形式主语和虚拟语气， If so, I can listen to it when it is convenient. 这句话用了省略句。

考点：考查书信类写作