题目内容
14.假设你是李华,请给你美国的笔友Tom回信,告诉他你今年春节是如何度过的.1春节在寒假期间,你和父母一起准备;
2春节前,大扫除,买东西,如食物、新衣服等;
3你本来要跟父母去串门,却生病了,因为吃太多油腻的食物;
4这个春节让你明白,健康需要平衡的饮食,尤其多吃蔬菜水果,定期进行体育锻炼.
注意:1词数100左右;
2开头和结尾为你写好,不计入词数;
Dear Tom,
In your last letter,you asked me about the Spring Festival this year, .
Expecting your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息请给你美国的笔友Tom回信,告诉他你今年春节是如何度过的,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:春节在寒假期间,你和父母一起准备;春节前,大扫除,买东西,如食物、新衣服等;你本来要跟父母去串门,却生病了,因为吃太多油腻的食物;这个春节让你明白,健康需要平衡的饮食,尤其多吃蔬菜水果,定期进行体育锻炼.2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:prepare for 为…作准备;including 包括;couldn't wait to do迫不及待地去做;unluckily不幸的是;a balanced diet平衡饮食;keep fit保持健康;Above all毕竟;Besides另外;
The Spring Festival just happened during my winter holiday,so I had enough time to help my parents prepare for it.(高分句型一)
I couldn't wait to visit our relatives with my parents during the festival,but unluckily,I fell ill.(高分句型二)
The reason was that I had eaten too much fatty food.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Tom,
In your last letter,you asked me about the Spring Festival this year.Now let me tell you how I spent it.
The Spring Festival just happened during my winter holiday,so I had enough time to help my parents prepare for it.(高分句型一)Before the Spring Festival,we cleaned our house completely and bought many things,including different kinds of food and new clothing.I couldn't wait to visit our relatives with my parents during the festival,but unluckily,I fell ill.(高分句型二)The reason was that I had eaten too much fatty food.(高分句型三)
The unhappy Spring Festival lets me know a balanced diet is necessary to keep fit.Above all,there must be enough vegetables and fruits.Besides,we should exercise regularly.
Expecting your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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| How to Overcome Stage Fright | |
| Tip 1 | (16)Practice/practisein front of family,friends. |
| Tip 2 | Gain confidence by reciting(17)linesin front of a mirror. |
| Tip 3 | Take a deep breath to get rid of(18)tensionand anxiety. |
| Tip 4 | Have a good (19)attitude-keep(20)smilingwith eyes. |