Question

12．过度包装造成商品成本高、体积大、分量重，一度引起人们的反对．请仔细观察下幅漫画，用英语写一篇短文，分析出现这一现象的原因，并谈谈你的看法和建议．
注意：
1．词数150左右；
2．为使行文连贯，可适当增加细节．

Answer 1

分析 本文议论文．图画为讽刺类漫画．
写作主题为：对过度包装的看法
写作要点为：1，描述所看的图画；2，分析现象；3，表达观点；4．节约资源的建议．

解答 As can be seen in the cartoon，the tiny product is hidden in layers of cardboard boxes，and the customer nearly can't find it．Nowadays excessive packaging can be seen here and there，fruits put in hand-woven baskets，moon-cakes placed in delicate boxes and people become increasingly aware of the problem．
   What are the causes of this phenomenon？For one thing，many companies believe that excessive packing can attract customers'attention so as to gain more profits．For another，some consumers believe that the more delicate the package is，the better the quality will be．As far as I am concerned，excessive packaging is actually a waste of resources and may cause unnecessary environmental pollution，so it should be avoided．
   It's high time to deal with this problem．To begin with，laws should be made to restrict excessive packaging．What's more，we should build the awareness that excessive packaging doesn't equal high quality and advocate appropriate packaging．

点评 考生需根据所提供的信息提炼文章的写作主题，需了解写作要点及写作意图，仔细构思写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识．