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13．On a bright，warm July afternoon，Mac Hollan，a primary school teacher，was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends．One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair，but they had encouraged Mac to carry on，and they would catch up with him soon．As Mac pedaled （骑行） along alone，he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home．He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday．
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him．"Man，that's a big dog!"he thought．But when he looked to the side，he saw instantly that it wasn't a dog at all，but a wolf，quickly catching up with him．
Mac's heart jumped．He found out his can of hear spray．With one hand on the bars，he fired the spray at the wolf．A bright red cloud enveloped the animal，and to Mac's relief，it fell back，shaking its head．But a minute later，it was by his side again．Then it attacked the back of Mac's bike，tearing open his tent bag．He fired at the wolf a second time，and again，it fell back only to quickly restart the chase（追赶）．
Mac was pedaling hard now．He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down．He saw a steep uphill climb before him．He knew that  once he hit the hill，he'd be easy caught up and the wolf's teeth would be tearing into his flesh．
At this moment，Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska．They didn't think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road．A bit later，they spotted what they，too，assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike．As they got closer，they realized that the dog was a wolf．Mac heard a large vehicle behind him．He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast，just a dozen yards away now．
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
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4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．
      The car abruptly stopped in front of him．Paul shouted through the window，"Get in the car quickly!"Mac jumped off the bicycle andjumped into the back seat of the car without hesitation．（高分句型一） In the meanwile，the wolf caught up．Luckily，the car's door washard enough and Mac was safe．Beeky threw somefood out of the window and Paul pressed the button of the horn to make an alert．Finally，the wolf left and disappeared．"Oh my god，my friends are still repairing the bicycle!"shouted Mac．Without a second thought，Paul drove the car quickly back to find the two cyclists，only to find they were gone．（高分句型二）
      A few minutes later，the other two cyclists arrived．"Thank godness!Where did you go？"Mac held his two friends tightly in arms．"I'm happy to see you again，my friend．Inoticed a big dog running on the road when I was repairing my bike．And then we realized thatit was a wolf，so we kept hiding ourselves until it went away．""Oh，my god，without these two gentlemen's help，I would be the dinner of the wolf．"Finally，though tired，they continued their way and reached Alaska，safe and sound．（高分句型三） What an unforgettable experience they shared!．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于续写故事．写作时注意以下几点：首先仔细阅读原来故事的内容．原来故事主要情节为：Mac Hollan在与朋友们骑自行车去阿拉斯加时，一位朋友停下来修自行车，他们鼓励Mac一个人先骑走，说等会就会赶上来．Mac不幸遇到了一只狼，在逃生中，遇到了驾车的Paul和Beeky．Paul停车准备相助，故事戛然而止．
     结合所给的两段内容的开头语可以判断，接下来需要续写Paul帮助Mac逃生的方法及过程．需要注意的是，本文描述的是已经发生的故事，时态应该使用一般过去时．最后注意使用一些动词和形容词，穿插一些过渡性词语，以使文章条理清晰，行文紧凑．同时注意书写规范，尽量避免使用没有把握的单词和句子．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：without  hesitation毫不犹豫；In the meanwile同时；Without a second thought毫不迟疑；Finally，最后；safe and sound  平安无恙；
Mac jumped off the bicycle and jumped into the back seat of the car  without  hesitation．（高分句型一）
Without a second thought，Paul drove the car quickly back to find the two cyclists，only to find they were gone．（高分句型二）
Finally，though tired，they continued their way and reached Alaska，safe and sound．（高分句型三）

解答 Para1：The car abruptly stopped in front of him．Paul shouted through the window，"Get in the car quickly!"Mac jumped off the bicycle and jumped into the back seat of the car  without  hesitation．（高分句型一） In the meanwile，the wolf caught up．Luckily，the car's door was hard enough and Mac was safe．Beeky threw some food out of the window and Paul pressed the button of the horn to make an alert．Finally，the wolf left and disappeared．"Oh my god，my friends are still repairing the bicycle!"shouted Mac．Without a second thought，Paul drove the car quickly back to find the two cyclists，only to find they were gone．（高分句型二）
 Para2：A few minutes later，the other two cyclists arrived．"Thank godness!Where did you go？"Mac held his two friends tightly in arms．"I'm happy to see you again，my friend．I noticed a big dog running on the road when I was repairing my bike．And then we realized that it was a wolf，so we kept hiding ourselves until it went away．""Oh，my god，without these two gentlemen's help，I would be the dinner of the wolf．"Finally，though tired，they continued their way and reached Alaska，safe and sound．（高分句型三） What an unforgettable experience they shared!

点评 续写时注意以下问题：
1．与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；
2．内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况；
3．应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；
4．上下文的连贯性．