题目内容
【题目】假设你是新华中学的刘梅，将参加主题为“Let’s ride bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一篇演讲稿，主要内容包括：
1、目前汽车带来的问题。
2、骑自行车的益处。
3、发出号召。
参考词汇：节能的 energy-saving
低碳城市 a low-carbon city
注意：1. 词数在100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语和结束语已写好, 不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone,
I am Liu Mei from Xinhua Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Let’s ride bicycles”.
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Thank you！
【答案】Good morning, everyone,
I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Let’s ride bicycles”.
As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.
How can we solve the problems then? As far as I’m concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don’t need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another thing, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won’t give off waste gas. What’s more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health.
Therefore, let’s take the responsibility to build up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us!
Thank you!
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇主题为“Let’s ride bicycles”的演讲稿，号召大家一起骑自行车，实现节能环保。
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 目前汽车带来的问题；
2. 骑自行车的益处；
3. 发出号召。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
living standards；bring great convenience to；air pollution；traffic jams；give off；waste gas；be beneficial to；take the responsibility
第三步：连词成句
1. with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life.
2. they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.
3. bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won’t give off waste gas.
4. it is beneficial to our health.
5. let’s take the responsibility to build up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles.
(根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。）
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择：either…or…，or
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
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