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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Looking back to the National English Speaking Competition I take part in several days ago, I have a lot to share to you.

Firstly, I feel real delighted that I’ve won the first prize in the competition, which makes me to understand the true meaning of the proverb “No pains, no gains”. Besides, I’ve established the friendship with students from all over our country, from which I’ve learned a lot. More importantly, participate in this competition has enabled me to overcome my fear of speaking in public, thus developing my self-confidence. Additionally, I owe much thanks to my teachers and judges. Without his help, I couldn’t have done such excellent job.

To sum up, I will always treasure this meaningful and memorable experiences.

Answer 1

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【解析】试题分析：作者回顾自己参加英语演讲比赛后的一些体会。

1.考查时态。根据本句中的时间状语several days ago可知用过去时，故take改为took。

2.考查介词。此处为固定搭配：share with sb：和某人分享。

3.考查副词。此处为副词修饰形容词delighted，故用really。

4.考查动词。此处为make的固定用法：make sb do sth：让某人做某事，故去掉to。

5.考查连词。此处为定语从句，先行词为students，是人，而且关系代词前有介词，介词后接表示人的关系代词只能用whom。

6.考查动名词。此处为动名词短语做主语。不能用动词原形做主语，故改为participate。

7.考查代词。此处thanks是复数名词，不能用much,要用many才能修饰可数名词的复数。

8.考查代词。此处是指前文中提到的老师们和裁判们的帮助，是他们的，故用their。

9.考查冠词。此处为固定搭配：do an excellent job：做得好，做得漂亮。

10.考查名词单复数。此处是指这一次的经历，应该为单数概念，故用experience。