Question

据报道,我国学生近视率居世界第一。造成这一现象的原因是多方面的, 请你以 "Why are more and more children getting short-sighted?" 为题, 写一篇英语短文。
内容主要包括： 1. 造成学生近视的原因；  2. 如何保护视力？
注意: 1.词数120左右；
2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；
3.短文的开头已经写好, 不计入总词数。
参考词汇: 近视率 rate of myopia
Why are more and more children getting short-sighted?
It is reported that the rate of myopia of Chinese students is ranked as the highest in the world _______________________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

One possible version:
Why are more and more children getting short-sighted?
It is reported that the rate of myopia of Chinese students is ranked as the highest in the world.
The causes of myopia are complicated. Firstly, too much homework leads to the lack of time for exercise and a good sleep. Long time of studying makes it difficult to refresh eyesight. Secondly, medical research shows genetic factors also contribute to poor eyesight. In addition, many students don’t form good eye care habits. For example, when reading, some students hold books too close to their eyes.
Realizing the reasons of this result, it’s time for us to take measures to protect eyesight. I think the most important is to encourage students to engage in more outdoor activities and create a vision-friendly studying environment.

解析试题分析：本文是篇材料作文, 要求对学生近视的情况进行分析1. 造成学生近视的原因；2. 如何保护视力？所以要用一般现在时。字数要求100-120词左右。所以要求根据个人理解说明原因和保护视力的措施。还应该注意使用较高级的词汇和句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如lead to，throw away，As we all know, For example，take measures，engage in，还运用了不定式作主语、宾语； 非谓语作状语等等。并注意了句子变化和句子之间的衔接如：In addition，What’s more 等等。
考点：提纲作文。