题目内容
一则“一位9岁男童因扶起摔倒的老太太而遭讹诈”的网帖引起热议,老太太坚持说小男孩吧她撞到了,向其索要治疗费用,幸亏当时有路过的群众作证,要不道德何在?这件事让这个小男孩的父母很气愤。请你根据以下要求,写一篇英语短文:
1、简述事件的内容
2、你的看法。
注意:1、词数120左右;
2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
One possible version:
This morning when I read a newspaper, a piece of news attracted my attention. A kind-hearted boy at the age of nine pulled up and helped her when seeing an old woman fall over .However, the old woman insisted that the boy had treatment afterwards, which upset his parents. Fortunately, some witnesses happened to pass by and were willing to testify for the child. Therefore, the boy was not wronged at last.
I felt very bad after reading the news. How come a man has to face the risk of being deliberately harmed by the person he offers help to? If this is the price of helping others, I think few would dare to do any good deed. I hope that things of this kind will not happen again forever.
【解析】
试题分析:根据作文提供的要点说明可以判断本文应该写成一篇夹叙夹议的文章。在谋篇布局时可以采用两段式结构,先简要叙述事件的内容,然后对此发表看法。为了行文的需要可以适当发挥想象,补充内容,但是不要过于繁琐,注意文章的字数要求。在时态方面,讲述过去的事情应该使用一般过去时,发表议论部分应该使用一般现在时。此外,为了提高文章档次,要尽量使用多种句式结构和高级词汇。参考词汇:in my opinion,do sb wrong,on purpose等。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达段落分明,层次清晰。首段讲述了故事的内容经过,第二段对此发表自己的观点看法。作者在文中使用了however,fortunately,therefore等过渡词汇使句子与句子之间衔接紧凑,语义连贯。还使用了条件状语从句If this is the price of helping others,宾语从句that things of this kind will not happen again forever,定语从句 which upset his parents.等复合句,增加了文章的亮点。长句How come a man has to face the risk of being deliberately harmed by the person he offers help to?的使用不仅表达了作者的质疑也成为文章的另一个亮点。
考点:考查提纲作文