Question

【题目】请改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉；
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Saturday, my parents and I paid visit to my grandparents by train. There was a large number of people in the crowded train, but everyone help those who had lots of baggage and behaved politely. Along the way, we enjoyed beautifully views. At first, we saw one hill after another. Then what came into our eye were fields with green crops. In a six-hour trip, we arrived at my grandparents' house. Exhausted though I felt, but I was happy to see my grandparents, which I hadn't seen for a long time. It's really an excited trip because it was the first time I had taken so a long-distance train.

Answer 1

【答案】Paid后面加a；was—were；help—helped；beautifully—beautiful；eye—eyes；in—after；but去掉；which—whom；excited—exciting；so--such
【解析】①Paid后面加a 考查固定短语。Pay a visit to参观、
② was—were 考查主谓一致。根据主语a large numberof people许多人可知用复数形式。
③help—helped 考查动词的时态。根据上句话提到there were可知用一般过去时，时态保持一致。
④beautifully—beautiful 考查形容词 。句意：我们享受美丽风景。
⑤eye--eyes 考查名词的复数形式。句意：首先看到是连绵的山，然后我们看到是绿色的庄稼。
⑥in--after 考查介词 。句意：六个小时的旅行后，我们到了外公家。
⑦but去掉 考查连词。在英语有虽然，没有但是。
⑧which--whom 考查定语从句。句意：虽然我们很累，但我很高兴看到外公外婆，我已经好久没有见到他们了。
⑨excited--exciting 考查形容词 。句意：这是一次令人兴奋的旅行，exciting用来修饰物；
⑩so—such 考查形容词。Such a/an+adj+名词 如此。。
考点 ：短文改错。