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6.假定你是李华.你们学校和一所美国中学签署了教师交流协议.在过去的一年里,你们的英文老师是来自这所中学的Sue Wood.不久前她返回美国任教.请你根据 写作要点和 要求给Sue写封电子邮件.
写作要点:
1.对她表达感谢之意;
2.介绍她离开后你自己及班里发生的事情;
3.希望了解她的近况.
要求:
1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域.
2.短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分).
3.内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯.
4.书写须清晰、工整.
5.邮件中不能体现本人真实信息.
       Dear Sure,
       I'm Li Hua,one of your students in China.It's almost a month since you left us.We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us.
We are busy as usual.We had an English speech contest the other day.I won the first prize!This again reminds me of all your kind help.Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school?Yesterday,we went there and watered them.The tree you planted yourself is growing well,and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood.Will you come back to see Sue Wood?
How is everything with you lately?We hope to know more about and your American students.Hope to keep in closetouch.
All the best
Li Hua.

分析 本文为应用文,根据写作要点和要求给Sue写一封电子邮件.属于提纲作文.时态为一般现在时和一般过去时.人称以第一和三人称为主.重要短语:miss sb(想念某人),be grateful for(感激),as usual(正如通常情况),win the first prize (赢得第一名),remind sb of sth (提醒某人某事),keep in close touch (保持联系).

解答 Dear Sue,
    I'm Li Hua,one of your students in China. It's almost a month since you left us.We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us.【高分句型】(表达感谢之意)
    We are busy as usual.We had an English speech contest the other day.I won the first prize!This again reminds me of all your kind help.Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school?【高分句型】Yesterday,we went there and watered them.The tree you planted yourself is growing well,and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood.Will you come back to see Sue Wood?(介绍自己及班里发生的事情)
     How is everything with you lately?We hope to know more about and your American students.Hope to keep in close touch.(希望了解她的近况)                                                                         
     All the best
                                                                                                         Li Hua

点评 写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲,并充分发挥自己的想象力,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将要点完整地表述出来,注意主次分明,详略得当.语言力求准确、简洁.应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性.最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等.

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