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【题目】文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改，每句中最多有两处。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词的下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last Saturday I went to the library as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happened. I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.

I am proud what I did. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.

Answer 1

【答案】Last Saturday 1 went to the library asusually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading usual

near a lakewhilesuddenly Ihearsomeone crying for help. I went up to see what washappened. when heard

happening shocked

I wasshockingto find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while manypeopleswere

people

standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, Ipushed through the crowd as Itook off my coat,butjumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back andto safety. Tohisgreat relief, the kid was saved. my

I was proudwhat I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is inneed. of

【解析】试题分析：上周六我和往常一样去图书馆，当我在湖边看书的时候，突然听到喊救命声。我立马跑过去看看发生了什么事情，让人震惊的是我看到一个小孩在水里挣扎，我毫不犹豫得跳进水中，终于把孩子救了上来。

【1】usually→ usual 。I went to the library as usually.固定短语 as usual“像往常一样”，所以把usually改为usual。

【2】while →when。I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help固定句型 be doing sth ……when“正在做某事这时”，while后不能跟短暂性动词，把while改为when。

【3】hear→ heard 。I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help根据语境可知作者叙述过去的事情，故把hear改为heard。

【4】happened →happening。 I went up to see what was happened.。happen是不及物动词，没有被动形式，根据语境可知此处表示当时正在发生的事情，故用进行时态，把happened改为happening。

【5】shocking→ shocked 。I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water。shocking意思是“令人震惊的”，指事物的特征，shocked意思是“感到震惊的”指的是人的感受，所以把shocking改为shocked。

【6】peoples →people。while many peoples were standing。people当“人们”讲时，没有复数形式，如果当“民族”讲时，可以有复数形式，故把peoples改为people。

【7】pushed 前去掉had。I had pushed through the crowd。从事情发生的情况可以判断作者一边推开人群，一边脱外套，表示两个动作同时发生，而不表示动作先后，不用过去完成时态，故把had去掉。

【8】but → and。but jumped into the water quickly。由语境可知took off和jumped into是连续发出的动作，没有转折关系，故把but改为and。

【9】his →my。To his great relief, the kid was saved. 。根据语境可知看到孩子安然无恙，作者感到如释重负，把his改为my。

【10】proud后加 of。I was proud what I had done.。固定短语：be proud of “对……感到骄傲，自豪”，后面跟名词，代词，动名词或what从句，所以在proud 后加of。