Question

新课程实施以来，有些学校取消了晚自习，你所在的班级学生对是否取消晚自习展开了一次讨论。请结合以下讨论内容用英语写一篇短文，并发表自己的看法。

赞成观点	反对观点
1.能给学生更多的自主学习和休息时间； 2.有时间发展个人爱好。	1.相对在家自习，在校学习效率更高； 2.通过师生交流，生生交流，学习问题可以得到及时解决。
你的观点……

注意：1. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；2. 词数：120左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Recently, our class have held a heated discussion about whether evening classes should be cancelled. ________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

Recently, our class has held a heated discussion about whether evening classes should be cancelled. Opinions vary from person to person.

Some of them are in favor of the idea that the evening classes should be cancelled. To begin with, cancelling evening classes means that they have more time for independent learning and resting. Besides, students will have more time to develop their hobbies such as reading, playing sports, drawing and so on. However, others object to this idea. From their point of view, compared with studying at home, studying at school may lead to high study efficiency. What’s more, the problems existing in study can be dealt with as soon as possible by means of communicating with teachers and cooperating with classmates.

Weighing advantages and disadvantages, I prefer studying at home because I’m willing to form the habit of being independent and I tend to arrange study time myself.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，主题是是否取消晚课，给出了大部分要点，就是对赞成和反对的不同观点，要考生给出自己的观点。文章结构清晰，先是赞同的观点，然后是反对的观点，最后是自己的观点，要求考生用地道的英语表达自己的观点，要求观点明确，驾驭语言的能力强，选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇，也要运用多种句型，让文章更有变化。难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。在写作的时候要运用合适的连接词把要点串联起来，使文章成为一个整体。

【亮点说明】范文观点明确，结构清晰，语言简洁，用词讲究，句式多变，举例如下： in favor of赞同， To begin with首先, by means of通过，object to反对，From their point of view, 就他们看来，the idea 后面是that连接的同位语从句， cancelling evening classes means that they have more time for independent learning and resting.这句话使用了动名词做主语和that引导的宾语从句， compared with studying at home, studying at school may lead to high study efficiency. 这句话使用了过去分词做状语，the problems existing in study can be dealt with as soon as possible by means of communicating with teachers and cooperating with classmates.这句话用现在分词做短语，Weighing advantages and disadvantages, I prefer studying at home because I’m willing to form the habit of being independent and I tend to arrange study time myself.这句话使用现在分词做状语。还有Besides,However, What’s more,这些词的使用使文章更加连贯。

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