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2．我校将于5月30日组织高三年级学生进行远足，假设你是学生会主席，向学生发布此通知：
活动意义：走进自然，感受大自然的气息；考验学生毅力；强身健体．
路线：从学校出发，沿北京路向西行进，终点凤凰谷．
出行建议：1．穿结实的鞋，因为要走很多的路．
                  2．自带水和食物，中午在凤凰谷野餐．
                  3．可自带相机，与自然或同学合影留念．
最后祝大家出游愉快．
注意事项：1．字数：100 左右
                 2．参考词汇：凤凰谷：the Fenghuang Valley 目的地：destination
                 3．短文中不能出现真实姓名和地名．
Hello，my dear fellows，I'm the president of the Students Union．
Here comes the good news，our school intends to organize an outing for Senior Three students on May 30th，which aims at us embracing nature，testing our will power and building up our strength．（高分句型一）We will start from our school，walk along the Beijing Road and finally come to our destination-the Fenghuang Valley．
As we will do a lot of walking，you'd better wear strong shoes．Make sure to take some water and food with you for we will have a picnic in the valley at noon．（高分句型二）If possible，you can take a camera to take some pictures．（高分句型三）Finally，wish everyone a good trip．．

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息 我校将于5月30日组织高三年级学生进行远足，假设你是学生会主席，向学生发布此通知．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：活动意义；路线；出行建议；最后祝大家出游愉快．    2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：intend to 打算，想要做；aim at目的是；build up our strength增强体魄；Make sure确保；take some pictures拍照；Finally最后；
Here comes the good news，our school intends to organize an outing for Senior Three students on May 30th，which aims at us embracing nature，testing our will power and building up our strength．（高分句型一）
Make sure to take some water and food with you for we will have a picnic in the valley at noon．（高分句型二）
If possible，you can take a camera to take some pictures．（高分句型三）

解答 Hello，my dear fellows，I'm the president of the Students Union．
      Here comes the good news，our school intends to organize an outing for Senior Three students on May 30th，which aims at us embracing nature，testing our will power and building up our strength．（高分句型一）We will start from our school，walk along the Beijing Road and finally come to our destination-the Fenghuang Valley．
      As we will do a lot of walking，you'd better wear strong shoes．Make sure to take some water and food with you for we will have a picnic in the valley at noon．（高分句型二）If possible，you can take a camera to take some pictures．（高分句型三）Finally，wish everyone a good trip．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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