题目内容
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)花掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第1处起)不计分。
When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other when fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.
When I was in high school, most of my friend (改为friends) had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it(改为one). One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that (改为which)was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father^(加 for) the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He(改为I ) should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the (去掉)school. My father was pleased if(改为when ) I showed him the money a month after(改为later). He gives (改为gave )me the other when fifty. You can imagine how much(去掉) happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.