Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三（1）班学生李欢， 请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文日记，记录你班同学上周六参观中国科学院的全过程。

注意：词数不少于60. 提示词：中国科学院 Chinese Academy of Sciences

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Answer 1

【答案】 Last Saturday, my classmates and I went to the Chinese Academy of Sciences, which was a precious chance/golden opportunity to get close to science.

The moment we arrived at the Chinese Academy of Sciences, we were warmly greeted by a friendly expert standing at the entrance. Excited and happy, we clapped our hands and everyone was eager to explore the amazing scientific world. To have a better understanding of daily basic science, we attended a professional lecture themed Life and Water. A professor introduced the topic in such great detail that we all gave full attention and took a lot of notes.

The highlight of the visit was the hands-on experience in the science lab. Under the guidance of the expert, we got involved in a medical experiment with great care and enthusiasm. Observing the samples through the microscope, we, for the first time, got to know how anti-cancer drugs were developed and what awesome achievements our hardworking scientists had made. We also felt proud of the medical progress of our country.

Before we left, we invited the expert to take a group photo with us as a reminder of the fantastic visit, everyone wearing a big smile. Through the meaningful activity, we all agree that science plays an important role in our life and we will study hard to take advantage of it to make our world a better place.

【解析】

本篇书面表达是一篇图画作文。假定你是李欢，根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文日记，记录你班同学上周六参观中国科学院的全过程。

这是一篇图画作文，我们需要用恰当的英语将图画所反映的内容表达出来。动笔前，要认真分析图画，将四幅图的内容有机地连接起来。写作时注意准确运用时态，主要使用一般过去时。上下文要意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

分析图画可知，第一幅图：我们一到中科院，就受到站在入口处的一位友好专家的热烈欢迎。我们兴奋地鼓掌。第二幅图：我们参加了以“生活与水”为主题的专业讲座。一位教授非常详细地介绍这个话题，我们都全神贯注地做笔记。第三幅图：在科学实验室，我们通过显微镜观察样本，了解到抗癌药物是如何开发的。第四幅图：我们邀请了专家与我们合影留念，大家都面带笑容。通过这次有意义的活动，我们认识到科学在我们的生活中起着重要的作用。我们要努力学习，利用好科学，使我们的世界更美好。

根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语有：precious; golden opportunity; get close to; be greeted by; at the entrance; clap hands; be eager to do; scientific world; have a better understanding of; attend a professional lecture; in detail; take note; highlight; the hands-on experience; under the guidance of ; get involved in; medical experiment; enthusiasm; through the microscope; anti-cancer drugs; make awesome achievements; feel proud of; take photo with sb.; as a reminder of ; wear a smile; play an important role in; take advantage of。

可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second… And then,Finally,In the end,At last,Above all等；2.表并列补充关系：What is more,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,In addition,as well as,not only…but (also)等。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。