Question

短文改错 One afternoon my father and I go fishing on a 1．________ riverside．We found the water was very dirty that 2．________ we could not see the bottom．We also found some 3．________ rubbish or dead fish flowing on the water．That 4．________ afternoon, my father and I caught only a smaller fish． 5．________ Why do the fish in the river die?That was because 6．________ of a lot of factories along the river always 7．________ poured its waste water and rubbish into the river 8．________ and the water got pulluting．Thus, most of the 9．________ fish in the river killed． 10．________

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解析：

　　1．go改为went(通读全文，可知本文的主体时态为过去时。)

　　2．very改为so(“so…that…”句型用来表示其结果，“如此……以致……”。)

　　3．√

　　4．or改为and(此处some rubbish和dead fish为并列关系，而不是选择关系。)

　　5．smaller改为small(根据上下文，这里无比较的对象，应用原形。)

　　6．do改为did(前后均为过去时，应与全文保持一致。)

　　7．去掉行首的of(because of和because都表示“原因”前者为介词短语，后接名词、代词、动名词；而后者为连词，后接从句。)

　　8．its改为their(factories是复数名词，后面的物主代词也应与其保持一致。)

　　9．polluting改为polluted(根据语意，水污染，应用过去分词表示被动。)

　　10．在killed之前加were(鱼是被污染的河水所致死，应用被动语态。)