题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华。在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事,请阅读启事,并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。写作要点:
1. 陈述应征目的;2. 说明应征条件(性格、能力等);3. 表达意愿和感谢。
写作要求:1. 邮件词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾部分已写好,不计入总词数;
3. 可根据情况增加细节,使行文连贯;
4. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Volunteers Wanted
Our annual English Festival, which will be held on November 18-19, 2019, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and English Debate. If you are interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Mrs Chen atchenlaoshi@aef.com.
Dear Mrs Chen,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 3,Grade 1. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mrs Chen ,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class3, Grade 1. I’m writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.
As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates. Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours ,
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇提纲类写作。
第1步:根据提示可知,假如你是李华。在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事,请阅读启事,并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。写作要点:1. 陈述应征目的;2. 说明应征条件(性格、能力等);3. 表达意愿和感谢。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):apply for (申请);precious (宝贵的);be able to(能够);organizational ability(组织能力);communication skills(沟通技能);in public (在公共场合)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。