Question

【题目】文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处下加一个漏子符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误仅限1词

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I’m glad to learn that part-time assistants were wanted in your studio and I’d like to have a try. I’m a student who is graduated from high school soon. Before attending the college, I’ll have a long holiday and I’m determined to make the best of them. Since childhood, I have developed a strong interest in storytelling and watching films. My teacher thinks high of my performance in the language class, when I have also acquired a good knowledge of American movie industry. Except that, I am monitor of my class and thus have gained many experience in management.

I will undertake full responsibility and spare no effort to do my share of work. I am fully convinced that through communication with the staffs, I can get some valuable work experience as well as develop my social skills.

I’m looking forward to receiving your reply soon. Thank you for your consider.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】1. were—are;

2. graduated—graduating;

3. 去掉 “attend” 后 “the”;

4. them—it;

5. high—highly;

6. when—where;

7. Except—Besides;

8. many—much;

9. staffs—staff;

10. consider—consideration

【解析】1.句意：我很高兴你们这里招聘兼职助理，我愿意试一试。根据句意可知句子用一般现在时态，故把were—are。

2.句意：我是一名不久就要毕业的大学生。此处是主动语态，进行表示将来，故把graduated—graduating。

3.句意：上大学以前。固定搭配：attend college上大学，故去掉 “attend” 后 “the”。

4.句意：上大学以前我有一个长的假期，我决定充分利用它。故把them—it。

5.句意：我的老师高度评价我在语言课上的表现。think highly of高度评价，故把high—highly。

6.此处the language class是先行词，指的是地点，在后面的定语从句里面做地点状语，故把when—where。

7.句意：除了以上所说的之外，我还是我班的班长。根据句意可知把Except—Besides。

8.句意：我是班长因此我获得了很多管理方面的经验。experience经验，是不可数名词，故把many—much。

9.句中 staff的意思是“全体员工”，故把staffs—staff。

10.句意：谢谢你的关心。your是形容词性物主代词，后面用名词，故把consider—consideration。