题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,你的美国朋友彼得询问刚刚结束的第35届潍坊国际风筝节的情况,请你给他回复一封电子邮件,要点如下:
1. 时间:4月16日至21日,吸引了成千上万国内外游客;
2. 活动内容:万人放飞风筝,风筝设计大赛等:
3. 参赛人员:来自35个国家和地区的117支风筝代表队;
4. 目的:保护传统文化,广交各国朋友。
注意:1. 词数100左右
2. 可适当发挥, 以使行文连贯
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I know from your letter that you are eager to learn about the 35th Weifang International Kite Festival.
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I expect you will come and enjoy the festival next year. Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I know from your letter that you are eager to learn about the 33rd Weifang International Kite Festival. Now let me tell you. The Kite Festival lasted 6 days, from April 16th to 21st, which attracted hundreds of thousands of kite experts, fans and visitors from home and abroad. During the festival, thousands of people had great fun flying kites. Besides, there was a kite designing competition, aimed to choose the most creative maker. 117 teams from 35 countries took part in the kite flying competition. As is known to all, Weifang is famous as the Kite Capital of China. The festival is held yearly to protect the traditional culture and make friends from all over the world.
I expect you will come and enjoy the festival next year. Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:本文是一封电子邮件。你的美国朋友彼得询问刚刚结束的第35届潍坊国际风筝节的情况,请你给他回复一封电子邮件,要点如下: 时间:4月16日至21日,吸引了成千上万国内外游客; 活动内容:万人放飞风筝,风筝设计大赛等;参赛人员:来自35个国家和地区的117支风筝代表队;目的:保护传统文化,广交各国朋友。写作时认真阅读所给要点,确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用,主次分明,详略得当,语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【亮点说明】
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