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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有 10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写出该加的词.

删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉.

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词.

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分.

A famous film opened across the country last month， which was the biggest hit of the summer. Last Sunday，my family went to see a film. We booked tickets on advance. We were arrived at the cinema fifteen minutes early. We found it was crowd and people were talking about the film excited. I couldn't wait see my favorite star Jack，who plays a clever soldier in the film. It's a fun film combined lots of action and some humor with "feelings" for friend and families. They were all moved by the words at the end of the film. I will keep it in mind what my great country is always behind me.

Answer 1

【答案】1． a改为the

2． on改为in

3． 去掉were

4． crowd改为crowded

5． excited改为excitedly

6． wait后面加to

7． combined改为combining

8．friend 改为friends

9． They改为We

10． what改为that

【解析】

本文是记叙文，讲述上个月在全国上映了一部著名的电影，这是今年夏天最受欢迎的电影．上周日，我和家人去看了这部电影．我们都被电影结尾的话所感动．

1．考查冠词。句意：上个周日，我们全家去看这部电影。前面已经提到，所以用定冠词the表特指。故a改为the。

2．考查固定搭配。句意：我们提前订了票。in advance提前。故on改为in。

3．考查动词语态。句意：我们提前十五分钟到了电影院。arrive为不及物动词，无被动。故去掉were。

4．考查形容词。句意：我们发现电影院非常拥挤，他们都在兴奋地谈论着这部电影。根据前面的was可知此处用形容词作表语。crowded拥挤的。故crowd改为crowded。

5．考查副词。句意：我们发现电影院非常拥挤，他们都在兴奋地谈论着这部电影。修饰动词，所以用副词。故excited改为excitedly。

6．考查固定搭配。句意：我迫不及待想看到我最喜欢的明星Jack。can't wait to do sth迫不及待地做某事．故wait后面加to。

7．考查动名词。句意：这是一部有趣的电影，把动作和幽默与亲情和友情结合在一起。此处为现在分词作定语，film与combine构成主动关系，因此，用现在分词作定语。故combined改为combining。

8．考查名词的数。句意：这是一部有趣的电影，把动作和幽默与亲情和友情结合在一起。friend为可数名词，所以用复数泛指一类。故friend 改为friends。

9．考查人称代词。句意：我们都被电影结束时的字幕给打动了。指我们家人，所以用we作主语。故They改为We。

10．考查连接词。句意：我将牢记在心：住过是我的坚强后盾。it作形式宾语，that从句作真正宾语放在，后面，that不作成分，无含义。故what改为that。