Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友 Peter 发邮件告知他在校中国诗歌朗诵大赛中获得二等奖。请你回复邮件，

内容包括：

1. 表示祝贺；

2. 肯定他赛前的准备；

3. 希望他继续努力。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇： 中国诗歌朗诵大赛 the Chinese Poetry Recitation Competition

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I'm glad to hear that you won the second prize in the Chinese Poetry Recitation Competition held by your school. I'm really happy for you and I'd like to send my sincere congratulations.

I think you deserve what you have gained. Before the competition, you discussed with me about choosing a Chinese poem suitable for you to recite. Then you practiced the recitation every night, thus reciting the poem fluently and accurately. Additionally, you consulted your Chinese teacher, took his professional advice and patiently made improvements. It is because of your full preparations that you have performed excellently.

Congratulations to you again and I hope you can keep learning Chinese poetry and achieve more.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，对朋友获奖表示祝贺，并希望他继续努力。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1.表达祝贺。

2.肯定他赛前的准备工作。

3.希望他继续努力。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

be delighted to do, be happy for, give my sincere congratulation, deserve the prize, because of , keep learning, make great achievements

第三步：连词成句

I'm glad to hear that you won the second prize in the Chinese Poetry Recitation Competition.

I'm really happy for you.

I'd like to send my sincere congratulations.

I think you deserve the prize.

I hope you can keep learning Chinese poetry and make great achievements.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改

用宾语从句，过去分词短语作定语连接句子：I'm glad to hear that you won the second prize in the Chinese Poetry Recitation Competition held by your school.

用宾语从句：I think you deserve what you have gained.

用强调句型：It is because of your full preparations that you have performed excellently.