Question

请你根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。

Sharing is caring when it is given from the heart with pleasure.

The good returns are many and the rewards cannot be measured.

注意：①无须写标题；

②除诗歌外，文体不限；

③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

④词数为120左右，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。

 

Answer 1

Sharing is to us what air is to humans. We must learn to share with somebody. Sharing is not only physical but also mental satisfaction. I know sharing brings happiness.
The other day, just when I was caught in the sadness of failing the exam, you like an angel suddenly appeared. You told and taught me how to deal with these questions. Gradually, I knew the saying “The roses in her hand; the flavor in mine” I usually share my textbooks with others. And sometimes sharing a story which is full of encouragement can comfort people who are in trouble.
“Shared joy is a double joy; shared sorrow is half a sorrow.” In a word, the more things we share with others, the more happiness we can have.(128字)

【解析】

试题分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常简单，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，要求是叙述一件事情来反映主题，所以要用一般过去时。但本文必须用第一、三人称。再有就是不能根据材料逐字逐句的翻译应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如share with，deal with，be full of，in trouble，还运用了what引导的表语从句;动名词短语做主语，which和who引导定语从句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：in a word，gradually，not only…but also…等等。

考点：提纲作文